Reviews for Birthdays
Jo chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Please update xx
Guest chapter 6 . 4/16/2013
Brilliant story! thanks for updating, really enjoyed reading this chapter :)
Shawnyola chapter 6 . 4/16/2013
I'm glad Chas managed to make it to see little Aaron on his birthday, he would have been gutted otherwise. Sounds like had fun at the go karting except for Gordon! Aaron was so chuffed to see his mum, bless him and the holiday sounds good but I can't see Gordon allowing it. Nice little update x.
Shawnyola chapter 5 . 11/4/2012
Poor little Aaron, his birthdays seem to be getting worse! I can't blame Chas, wanting out of her marriage as it sounds pretty loveless but him not letting her take Aaron with her is very selfish as he doesn't seem to want much to do with Aaron himself. Loved Cain joining in the party games - what an image! x
markab chapter 5 . 11/4/2012
Always a pleasure to read, can't wait 'till the next birthday. x
BrokenSpear chapter 4 . 10/29/2012
It's heartbreaking to read how Gordon ignores his son's birthday and how he argues with Chas all the time. I can understand how badly it upset him.
With the on-screen story in mind Chas making that promise and the breaking it is bond to cause Aaron to resent her.

I wonder what Gordon is playing at? It seems to me that he either avoids the family or is having an affair. It'll be interesting to see how that works out.
I also wonder if you'll follow the on-screen story. It'll be fun to read either way but with the current set-up (Chas being closer to Aaron then Gordon) I got a feeling it may take another path.

Great new update. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself! I enjoyed this chapter a lot.
Shawnyola chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
This was a fine update, don't be so down on yourself! I must admit, I'm loving seeing toddler Aaron here, he really is so cute! Though it was sad that he had to hear his parents arguing on his birthday.

Gordon was pretty awful here, disappearing for most of the day. Little boys love to have their dads around on their birthdays, I know I did at that age! I'm interested to see if you're going to follow Aaron's on-screen history where Chas left him with Gordon at an early age? Nicely written chapter x.
loserkidkez chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
That was so cute.
You are so good at these :D
I can't wait for Aaron's other birthdays :D
This one was really good as well as he rest.
Keep it up. You're really talented :) xxx
Shawnyola chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
Aww, poor Aaron, banging his head like that and on his birthday too. It's a shame he missed out on most of his party as a result. Loved the mother and son relationship between Chas and Aaron and nice to see he hadn't got bored of Mickey! Poor Chas, fretting over what the other mums thought of her. Really nicely written x.
BrokenSpear chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Aww this such a adorable story! I'm really liking how it shows parent!chas and parent!gordon!Gordon seems like a good dad although a bit reserved. But that's not strange really as most dads are a bit reserved.

I'm really looking forward to what happens next!

It'll be interesting to see how the future chapters shapes up. I do wonder if you'll keep to canon (Chas and Gordon breaking up, Jackson dying) or something alternative? I have to admit that I'm curios about how his birthday with Jackson will look like (I do not now if it's show on screen though as I haven't seen that far in the story). But no pressure! Write the story as you want! :)
madinrotherham chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
This is an interesting story! Can't wait to see how the inevitable happens!
Shawnyola chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Aww, that was so cute! I loved little Aaron enjoying another birthday and loving his Mickey toy! Though sad when he'd thought he'd lost it and Chas had to go into the play gym to get it! Nicely written x.
loserkidkez chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Omggggg this is seriously beyond cute.
Thank you so much for updating. I love this so much and I hope you uodate soon. :D
loserkidkez chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Aww, baby Aaron sounds adorable :))

This seems like a really good idea and im looking forwa to more :D
Shawnyola chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Aww, that was lovely, little baby Aaron seemed so cute, especially sitting on his uncle Cain's lap, eating birthday cake! Really enjoyable little chapter x.
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