Reviews for Whipped Cream
BlackWolf99 chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
this is so cute, love your two was radio and roxises side to it btw.
Machi chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Is it weird that my favorite part of this story is how much Axel detests Sora? I'm sorry, but that's just golden.
Haha, I would have loved to see Riku's and Sora's faces when they saw what happened when Axel approached Roxas (I assume they were shamelessly watching the show).
Amazing as always, my dear.
Knit.pump chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Holy crap you need to write more snarky Sora and Axel. I reread their whole spat about five times as it was so ridiculously perfect. I loved that Axel was rambling and all over the place, the sentences felt hazy yet rushed and rapid. Your style of writing during the first half of this truly captured the fuzziness of being drunk.

Regarding your parting lesson, is El Toro that tequila with the little sombrero on top? If so, I too have learnt its devilish ways. In return, I would like to provide a lesson of my own: when playing a drinking game and having reached that awkward stage where most of the alcohol is gone, under no exception should you drink shots of Gin. NO EXCEPTION.
SethNightlord chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
A story this good deserves more reviews. I love your writing-it's beautiful even when drunk. This story made me smile like an idiot and I can't help but relate to it on so many levels. It makes me think back fondly on all my blackout nights.
Larkawolfgirl chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
This was pretty fun. Axel drunk was hilarious XD
ihasakeyblade123 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
I love this story to bits! You're writing style is just one of the awesomest ever, and one of my favourite things about this story is the way 'drunk Axel' thinks. It's hilarious when he automatically thinks it's a surprise party because he knows everyone in the club XD and also how he hates Sora A LOT, this is crack up! Awesome story!
JustOneDayMore chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I promise I will neverchug from a bottle of El Toro tequila. XD Anyway, this was so fun to read. Following drunk Axel's train of thought was too funny, and the other characters were awesome too. :3
Mitsy-R-Emrys chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
This is the craziest thing I have ever read. In a good way. As a dictionary type person my-self I absolutely loved the list of synonyms for drunk at the beginning, and the Inferno references. The characters are perfectly in character, and awesome. This was just overall awesome! :)
zombiecupcake'eats-you chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
...DAAAAMMMMMNNNN that was ultra awesome! Gosh it made me drool for it indeed. Gosh thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU for making this!
Beruldh's Babbles chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
HOLY FUCKING FUCK THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME! XD i loved this sooooooooo much! drunken Axel... XD
JayFX chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Love it! It was equally cute and funny and sexy! Amazing job!
WindRush chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Ah, this was so amazing! I loved it of course!
Jaysta the stalker chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I'm sorry good sir but I believe I just lost

Oh my god that was AWESOME

It's 1am what am I doing I'm gonna go to bed now thank you thank you
Dan-Dan x chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Wooow this was absolutely brilliant! I just loved the POV and the fact that Axel was an English Major which I can imagine. I see him being very witty in the best a class clown..making everyone laugh during lectures and stuff! Annnyyywaayyy, the amount of swearing in this is really effective and I just loved it.

Sora thinking Axel used his drink as backwash was HILARIOUS! Ohhh man. My friend recommended this oneshot to me and I'm overjoyed she did - it's brilliant! Keep up the good work...I got a good laugh out of this! Xxxxxx
Kunoichi21 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Is it safe to say I want to marry your genius? Seriously. Holy fuck. I don't... I can't tell you how much I love this. I just. AUGH! It's so unf. I love you. Also, I can kind of tell the drunkenness took the desired effect. Because there is no other way you could write what you wrote without being drunk. xD

Like saying this line, "Axel Flynn is the drunkest girl at the party..." xD I laughed so hard when I read that. And I just... Oh Lord, I love it. There is no way I could write something completely coherent if I were drunk. The fact that you did blows my mind. Oh! And I was reading this line, "Roxas is looking at him like he can't decide between being nervous and being nonchalant, and there're a few long, completely silent seconds after he closes the door behind them that they do nothing more than stand there and stare at each other, Roxas standing in the no man's land between their beds, Axel leaning back with one hand still against the door." when I heard a character in the game my dad is currently playing say, "Or maybe it's the lovers who can't stop staring at each other." AND I FUCKING LAUGHED MY ASS OFF. Oh my God.

This totally made my Singles Awareness Day amazing. So thank you, for being so damn talented at writing, even while drunk. xD And FYI, I'm totally serious about wanting to marry your genius.
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