|Reviews for Fragility|
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/7
Haha the worthless cowardly rape enabler turns to religion, typical
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/7
No Dave that's not how you take revenge on rapists
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/7
Hopy shit John is such a weenie
| Dirue chapter 20 . 8/7
Quite overdue for the epilogue, to see what happens to Dave.
| Yaoi Fangirl chapter 3 . 5/15
Wait, did John also get RAPED?! 0_0 My poor baby.
| Yaoi Fangirl chapter 1 . 5/15
Yeah, the American school system does suck. A lot.
| voldetort chapter 13 . 1/18
i vE READ THIS FIC LIKE 7 TIMES I STILL LOVE IT AND LIGHTINGS 'YOU BROKORO MY KOKORO' SGFRGJM I LOVE BOTH OF YOU
| breakdownbarrage chapter 7 . 1/13
FUCK U WANTED TEARS WELL DAMMIT YOU GOT THEM ASSHOLE (I'm on chapter six)
| amadeus17 chapter 20 . 12/4/2015
Where is the epilogue?
Please don't leave it like this...
| MagicWriterK chapter 20 . 10/19/2015
Hey...it's me again (ff won't let me post more than one review per chapter). Just wanted to say, this fic has stayed with me ever since I read it what feels like decades ago. This will forever be remembered as the fic that went beyond angst and scarred me for life (not in a bad way...okay, in a bad way, but it's not your fault). I mean, I just second-guess everything now. What if this IS just some reality I made up to convince myself that the world is a decent place? Or, why AREN'T I doing that? Seriously, the only thing keeping me sane is the fact that this can't be something made up by me - it's much too hard. Although I guess, in a way, it is? I make decisions, will ultimately shapes my life? Anyway, I'm getting off topic. I'm not sure whether to kiss or cure you, so I think I'll just stay here...mentally scarred by this twist ending...seriously if I ever find a fic sadder or more heart-wrenching than this, I will personally tell you. Not even Devalier has beaten you (though in all fairness, I haven't read his most popular work yet). So have a nice day. :')
| Noire Knightmare chapter 20 . 7/21/2015
I...I am honestly at a loss of words. I can't remember a time where I've felt so sad and angry; saddened at the truth of what happened, the heart-wrenching, believable truth that was inevitable, and angry at said truth. This is extremely well-written and it has emotionally moved me, yet I am facing extreme difficulty in conveying the initial shock and despair that overpowered me when acknowledging the nature of this chapter in particular-pain has rendered my understanding of the English language powerless, numbed in a sense.
I feel so selfish for asking this of you, as you have things of much greater importance to do in your time, but I beg of you that you update soon with the epilogue. If only to end the emotional turmoil I am currently experiencing. Please.
Once more, I apologize profusely on behalf of my self-centered request, however, I beseech you to indulge in this request of both myself and your enraptured audience.
Until then? Stay awesome.
| MagicWriterK chapter 20 . 6/8/2015
WHERE THE FUDGE IS THE EPILOGUE
I AM WAITING FOR THE EPILOGUE
THE EPILOGUE WHERE THIS IS ALL REVEALED AS A BAD DREAM
DAVE HAD A HORRIBLE, TERRIBLE DREAM THAT JOHN WAS REALLY DEAD AND THIS HAPPY ENDING WAS A FANTASY. BUT IN REALITY, HE WILL WAKE UP TO FIND JOHN ASKING HIM WHAT'S WRONG, WHAT THE MATTER IS
BECAUSE THIS SORT OF TWISTED PLOT TWIST JUST ISN'T POSSIBLE
| MagicWriterK chapter 19 . 6/8/2015
NOPE, THE SCHOOL IS COVERING JOHN SO HE CAN LEAVE.
YUP YUP YUPPITY YUP.
JOHN AIN'T DEAD, THAT'S NONSENSE.
MAYBE THIS IS JUST A DOOMED/DIFFERENT IMELINE WHERE JOHN JUMPED OFF THE ROOF. OR A DREAM.
(Sorry I have a habit of slipping into an accent when I get riled up)
| MagicWriterK chapter 17 . 6/8/2015
I'm sorry, but I forgot to add one part about the lady chapter. IF I WANTED TO QUOTE EVERY FUNNY LINE IN THAT LAST CHAPTER I WOULD HAVE PUT DOWN HALF THE CHAPTER.
That being said, this chapter made me squeal like a five year-old, no lie. THUMBS UP!
| MagicWriterK chapter 16 . 6/8/2015
DANGIT THIS CLIFFHANGER ONE OF THE WORSE I HAVE EVER READ GET ME THAT NEXT CHAPTER GET IT NOW.