|Reviews for Flower Boy|
| meettheRefferman chapter 6 . 9/27/2012
i feel this was kind of rushed
| Nasha Rei-Kun chapter 6 . 3/20/2012
I will be honest, and say that I felt that this was really rushed in the sense of romansu and developmento. I think that that in any way that Hanatarou becoming confidant in three months, or anything less than a year is too easy without watching what he had to go through in detailed paragraphs.
At Hanatarou's boldness in this chapter, I think that he would have taken the chance but he would have stopped inches away from his "Goal"(the kiss) and reconsider it by making up an excuse and picking something out of Karin's hair. With Karin being the one who can take advantage of a situation way more than Hanatarou can she would use the moment optimize the moment alot more than Hanatarou would.
If you think what I'm saying about the confidence thing may sound unlikely, pls read the stories Hanatarou called Lethal Hornet, Timid Healer, and another one called A Cat and Her Medic
| Nasha Rei-Kun chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
I like what you got going on here, but you might wanna try separating your paragraphs, kinda big.
I like the relationship the two share and hope you write more of this