|Reviews for Chip and Dale Rescue Rangers: Secrets and lies|
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Good. Not wonderful or terrific or even fantastic
| zencando chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Ok, I have written some bad stories in my time so I speak from experience. I STRONGLY recommend you have a friend or someone proof read your story.
Remember Quotations are your friend. They let the reader know when someone is talking.
Example: Dale said, "Please take this advice to heart."
See how quotations work there?
| The J.A.M chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Geez, ever hear of PUNCTUATION?