|Reviews for More Than Them|
| landcm01 chapter 4 . 6/12/2015
Ahhhhhhhh oh my goshhhhh. I just read More Than This and then this one today, and AHHHHH it's SO GOOD. S4 fics are my favorite, first of all. And second, near-death, totally-in-love Beckett fics will absolutely WRECK me. So well done on all accounts because these two fics were an absolute joy to read. I'm sure I'll be rereading them over and over whenever I need a pick-me-up.
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/13/2015
Thank you so much for all these wonderful stories you give us : )
| LivK. Norway chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
Hi,just so so fun to read,this play between them,so full of Joy and this new they things experience together...love it.
Please write more...soon.
| Liv Wilder chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
Just read this story, and the prequel, over the weekend for the first time, and wanted to say that I loved it. Not sure how I missed it first time around, but I'm really glad I found it now.
Their transformation was a joy to watch.
| Terry chapter 4 . 3/4/2014
Loved the story. Great imagery
| SeannysMom chapter 4 . 11/2/2012
Wonderful ! They are so in love and their relationships is so natural. I really love this free Kate ! Thank you for this awesome and well written story.
| Tony Mccarthy chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
Really Good I LIKED IT ... Nice Story
| spencemonroe chapter 4 . 5/11/2012
Ugh, took me forever to finish this; SO MUCH GOOD FANFIC, SO LITTLE TIME :) Thanks for posting!
(Oh, and, hey, Marlowe? What about taking a note from Emma? You know, give us some Caskett cuddles after that finale? Pretty please with sugar on top?)
| demuredemeanor chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
Damn my obligations to work and sleep.
But this was a great way for this to end!
| demuredemeanor chapter 3 . 3/23/2012
I love the 'Her socks don't match.' That speaks VOLUMES! Something so simple, that you drew on through the rest of the chapter, I love it!
As amazing as always!
| demuredemeanor chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
I really should have read this sooner!
| demuredemeanor chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I love the intimacy of the shower - so exposed and raw, but so chaise and loving, perfect!
| galinette33 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
These two stories (More than this/them) are just wonderful ! You wrote it (MTThem, chapt. 1) : “it’s just about them”.
“More than this” made me thinking about the freezer in season 3. You describe so well the urgency for them to say things when life is maybe running away. I like also the constrast between the building’s state, condition, and their state : more the building collapses, more their relationship strengthens…
And then “More than them” was just… great ! I think you just caught a side of Beckett, the way Beckett could be if she lets go, the person she wants to be. Chapter two, in particular, shows a free Beckett. And I always love when you put them in the Hamptons (and in a bath !)…
So, thanks for sharing your talent ! Always a nice time, reading your stories. (English is not my native langage, so sorry for grammar…).
| Miracle Mirth chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
How can you 'rough out' something? "She roughs out." I've never heard that before. You add "she has an amazing bedroom voice" after...so does 'rough' mean 'low' in this case? Aren't bedroom voices supposed to be smooth, velvet like and sexy? Not rough? lol...you've boggled my mind! Would you explain it to me? I feel kinda dumb that I'm not getting it :(
This was such a sweet continuation to your other story. It was fluffy and cute, which makes for good fic. Reading your stories is so much fun! Adding Shakespeare refs doesn't hurt either :D
| Miracle Mirth chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
"...he agrees, carding his fingers through her damp hair." The first image 'carding' conjured was weird, like an unruly child who has tangled hair, but then I sort of saw it in the way you intended. I dig it.
Cute chapter as well.