|Reviews for kerosene & desire|
| weasleyjumper chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
BROKE MY HEART AND MENDED IT AND WOWOWOWOW
| conquerors chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Oh my, please stop. This is so wonderful.
Ugh, just the language and the words you use is beautiful.
I really like Lily as a ballerina, it's a different side of her to what writers usually portray when writing her, and omg, louislily is such a cute couple.
| conquerors chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
I absolutely adored this chapter, and if the other chapters are as great as this one I can't wait to read them!
I've never considered Roxanne and Scorpius being friends - I've always pictured him being friends with Al and Rose - but I think this was a really interesting friendship that seemed plausible.
The prompts were well used, and you used some really beautiful language and sentences. I really liked the significance of the tree, and having Roxanne go back there and remembering him was very sweet.
I never pictured Scorpius as being such a kind person, considering his father's behaviour when he was younger, but I can picture him being nice towards Roxanne, and it was really cute how he supported her.
I really liked the last sentence, because who can't relate to that? Who hasn't let someone go, or done something that's ruined a friendship, and regretted it so much?
I hope you write more of this pairing, because you wrote it very well, and I was shipping them for a minute even though I'm an avid scorpiusdominique shipper.
| lowi chapter 19 . 5/13/2012
*le super creys*
this was so sad i can't even
just poor hugo he was so well written and fragile and broken and i just want to sob forever and hold him because stupd fred why can't he just leave that stupid girl
this was wonderful in other words XD (that's how i say "it was wonderful" YEP)
your drabbles are absolutely gorgeous, love!
| lowi chapter 18 . 5/13/2012
salkdjhaslkjlkg tooo preetyyyyy i can't :3
i love love love domscor and you wrote them so good and just aslödklsdj WOW OKAY
they are so they and tiklsdaäöxdk it's all too pretty and i love it okay X3333
| lowi chapter 17 . 5/13/2012
wow this was amazing, i loved this idea! and AGAIN, your last line, it's just KABOOM with all its perfectness. :3
jdlkasjdakl i loved it, okay!
GORGEOUS WORK ON THIS ONE. :D
| lowi chapter 16 . 5/13/2012
dkaksldjakslj this was pretty and so so /louis/, i loved it, you absolutely nailed him, rachel.
and the last line was so so beautiful, it just you know, echoes in my mind, haha XD
| lowi chapter 15 . 5/13/2012
YAY :DDDD finally a REALLY REALLY HAPPY ONE :DDDD
I AM HAPPY NOW :D
This was just too good and the ending i swear i grinned as much as lysander :3
WONDERFUL RACHEL, JUST FUCKING PERFECT! X3
| lowi chapter 14 . 5/13/2012
wow, this one was gorgeous, rachel! i love the imagery here, and just everything. your roxanne, she was amazing, sjdaskldjakl.
again; WONDERFUL WORK! (i'm repeating myself a lot, sorry)
| lowi chapter 13 . 5/13/2012
asjhdjah hahahaha yay for not making me cry first of all XD
but this was really awesome i liked it a lot! it was just cute and well i did feel a bit sorry for luce but haha really ;)
| lowi chapter 12 . 5/13/2012
i want happiness
happyhappyhappy right now
this is too sad
i'm about to curl up in a ball and sob any minute now
you simply cannot make scorlorcan unhappy
that is not fair
but then again
you wrote them wonderfully
| lowi chapter 11 . 5/13/2012
kklsadkölasjdl no non nononono not sad again stop making me want to cry rachel staaap it.
this was beautiful as usual okay and i love how you ended this that last line was GORGEOUS REALLY REALLY BEAUTIFUL okay :3
| lowi chapter 10 . 5/13/2012
oh nooooo poor molly :((( did you know i ship mollyteddy? because well guess if this broke my heart? hint it starts with a y...
this was so beautiful, and again so HEARTBREAKING SOBS.
Loved it! (even though that makes me sound pretty masochistic doesn't it)
| lowi chapter 9 . 5/13/2012
Aww, this was really sweet, Rachel! I like reading sibling!fics, especially Rose and Hugo, because that was the first thing I ever wrote... *nostalgic* ;)
Anyway, absolutely wonderful! :D
| lowi chapter 8 . 5/13/2012
This was so wonderful! I loved the style of this fic, the short sentences and the "bluntness" of it, if you know what I mean? There was just this certain tone in this drabble, I can't quite explain it, but I think you nailed it. Absolutely, this was BEAUTIFUL, but poor Ly though :(