|Reviews for Hidden|
| JS chapter 54 . 6/18
yes I enjoyed that especially the relationship and love between Charlie and Brax. Guess Phoebe is coming into it now too which will be interesting. I cannot stress enough - far too long between updates.
| Guest chapter 54 . 6/18
This is so good, please update soon.
| Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 54 . 6/17
Ricky or an old flame of Kyle's.
| hilly chapter 54 . 6/17
Great CHP cant wait 4 Kyle update soon xxx
| fanficforyou chapter 53 . 4/26
Yay! i guessed right! I wonder who it is and what will happen!
| Angel2021 chapter 53 . 4/23
Ah, glad Ricky is doing what she loves. I think Danny is at the pub
| JS chapter 53 . 4/23
I think it's Danny. Love this story but please please don't bring Ricky into it! I don't dislike her on the show anymore (quite feel sorry for her) but don't think she should be in the Chax fanfics and I am a devoted Chax fan anyway so that is my other reason for not wanting her in them. Good update otherwise but as I keep saying you really need to make updates more regular for continuation.
| guest chapter 53 . 4/22
Gr8 chp plz b Kyle
| JS chapter 52 . 4/16
Come On Please! The long gaps between updates is ruining this great story.
| fanficforyou chapter 52 . 4/2
I am guessing he asked her to marry him? Loved the bit with Heath and Charlie, with Heath calling her Buckton!I wonder who the person is at the end, cant wait to find out :)
| JS chapter 52 . 3/24
Yes, great update but you really need to update more often as you completely forget what has been happening in the story. Like the Chax chemistry!
| guest chapter 52 . 3/22
Great chapter needs a lot more Kyle though update soon xxx
| Guest chapter 51 . 1/3
Your fanfiction was interesting and exciting up to chapter 49, when reading chapter 50 if felt like I was watching a repeat of the soap as it seemed to be word for word from the soap. I am glad you made chapter 51 your own and not a re-write of the tv soap. Hope Rocco survives, also interesting new twist that Tamara knows Kyle already. Looking forward to next chapter .
| fanficforyou chapter 51 . 1/3
Interesting how you had tamara knowing kyle because he is her uncle's foster son
interested to see what will happen next - hope rocco doesnt die!
| fanficforyou chapter 50 . 12/1/2014
Really great to see an update!
would be nice to see a twist in this as it is basically the episodes from the show but i like the way you had charlie with brax instead of natalie
cant wait to read the next chapter :)