Reviews for Hidden
Guest chapter 51 . 1/3
Your fanfiction was interesting and exciting up to chapter 49, when reading chapter 50 if felt like I was watching a repeat of the soap as it seemed to be word for word from the soap. I am glad you made chapter 51 your own and not a re-write of the tv soap. Hope Rocco survives, also interesting new twist that Tamara knows Kyle already. Looking forward to next chapter .
fanficforyou chapter 51 . 1/3
Interesting how you had tamara knowing kyle because he is her uncle's foster son
interested to see what will happen next - hope rocco doesnt die!
fanficforyou chapter 50 . 12/1/2014
Really great to see an update!
would be nice to see a twist in this as it is basically the episodes from the show but i like the way you had charlie with brax instead of natalie
cant wait to read the next chapter :)
Guest chapter 50 . 11/30/2014
Enjoyed reading the chapters, don't like reading what has been shown on tv already gets boring, you should keep writing but make it your own story.
JS chapter 50 . 11/30/2014
Yes, far too long between updates and I had actually forgotten this story existed and it was one of my favourites. See you have done the outback scene where Brax and Natalie went to rescue Casey which I like but please don't leave it so long to update again as you do forget where the story has ended and have to re-read it all again. Good update though.
homeandawaylover chapter 50 . 11/29/2014
fanficforyou chapter 49 . 7/6/2014
Like how you showed the panic about casey's disappearance
i wonder who it is?
please update soon, cant wait to find out
Guest chapter 49 . 7/5/2014
Great update. I enjoy reading this story.
fanficforyou chapter 48 . 4/21/2014
Great chapter - so glad you updated!
Has Casey being kidnapped by Kyle - for Danny or something?
Cant wait for the arrival of the mystery visitor - who I still think is Kyle!

Please update real soon :)
JS chapter 48 . 4/21/2014
Sounds like Danny's work. Please update again soon .
thechosenbibliophile chapter 48 . 4/20/2014
Oh no! More please! This was perfect xxxx
Hope u had a perf easter :)
Guest chapter 48 . 4/20/2014
Good chapter but slightly rushed I think. And jumped a lot if it was slightly longer would have flowed better. But well done I like the story!
lazza77 chapter 48 . 4/20/2014
No not Casey. I hope he is found ok. More please
fanficforyou chapter 47 . 3/24/2014
Great - glad that you finally updated!
What is the surprise in the van?
And when is the mystery character coming (KYLE?)?
Please update sooner than last time, i really like this!
abby8ist chapter 47 . 3/24/2014
Hidden is without a doubt worth the wait. I Love this fanfiction u r such a talented writer .Love charlie and brax interactions the fact he won't let her out of his sight and holds her in his arms is super cute. :)
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