Reviews for The Gifts Given
ensis013 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Hello, it seems that chapter 1 and 2 are the same, or am I mistaken? Will you be reposting the prologue?
Blup chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I hate it when I accidentally post something before I'm done typing it. …_…
Anyway, I hope you've heard or played the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games. They're through the persepective of a Pokémon and there aren't any humans in the game...except for one that got turned into a Pokémon.
Anyway, this game has a much more heartwarming story than plenty of other video games. It literally made me cry. Twice.
I hope you can continue this story or possibly take my suggestion. :)
Blup chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I think you've accidentally replaced the actual prologue with an exact copy of the second chapter.
Anyway, interesting story. I hope you can continue it.
You're a really good writer, and I have a suggestion on a story you can write. A story based on the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games.
Hopefully, you've heard or
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
You seem to have replaced the prologue with another copy of the chapter which takes place two years later.

I'm interested in the story; I look forward to future updates.
White Fang chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Please write more, this is a good start and would hate to see such a promising story to not be finished.
ampplaca1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
U should continue the story it sounds pretty good so far