Reviews for Beats and Flowers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GAAWH I HOPE YOU UPDATE SPOON I NEED TO READ WHAT HAPPENED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... it's red... guessing the letter is from terezi? :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() And this literally describes why I love karkat so much~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Over protective karkat? Well this is gonna be awesome :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meep! Great chapter |
![]() ![]() I honestly love this story, more than I can express with words. I can't wait for you to update it, but I understand if you have things other things to do first. All together, I think that this story has a interesting, unique, and engaging plot. Your story deserves way more recognition! :D Megan |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRUH. YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT. Please update, This story is fucking amazing I love it So please No cliffhangers Just chapter 7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus that was cute. The davejade moments, I live for those moments |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fucking amazing. I'm in love with this story. Like omg. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jfc that was intense and cute af |
![]() ![]() Not a bad story. It does drag on a bit when it comes to the less interesting parts, but I'm fascinated to see where this fanfiction goes. However, you keep switching your verb tense from present to past, and it happens even in the same sentences sometimes; that's a problem and a distraction to readers. I hope you update at some point because although this story has some typos and probably should be beta'd, it's still enjoyable to read overall. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() Love this! You have quite a bit of typos though (but it happens) try proofreading a little more. Other then that... I freakin' love this story. The pacing, the characterization-everything. Good job and I hope you update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic! Please make more you have the makings of a young John Green! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story, but I find myself shipping Jade and Karkat instead of her with Dave...But still, a lovely story and I cannot wait to read the next part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE NOW |