Reviews for Needles
pikaree1 chapter 1 . 7/11
Too cute. *rolls around muffling squees with a pillow* Too cute, too cute, too cute! The gap is bridged! Sort of! Probably! And I love how Daisya basically says that out of all of them, Lenalee's the one Kanda tolerates the most. XD And I'm just imagining the scene at the end where Kanda is comforting Lenalee... *breaks off into another round of squealing* SO CUTE!
(And it figures Kanda would just tromp around grumpily and chop down the trees with one swing. XD)
Maria Albert chapter 4 . 6/17/2015
What a beautifully written story! It deserves far more attention than it has received. You provided a fascinating look into Lenalee, Daisya and Kanda’s early lives. I think the summary unfortunately makes people think this is simply a Christmas story, when instead it is an intensive look into the history of these complex characters. The story is complete, even without the missing final chapter you mentioned, and well worth the read, the best D. Gray-Man story I’ve read to date.
Firestar'sniece chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Dear AutumnMobile12,

1st chapter...

Okay, I have to admit that I'm a little confused. But that's probably because I've never seen the show before.

Out of curiosity, why did the previous administration ban Christmas? That, and I didn't understand the part about the holy war.

And for the new year, well, I'm related to people in China and the Chinese have their new year a few months after Christmas, so I'm confused as to how it would clash.

But the grammar and spelling are good, and it's well written, as far as I can tell. You always have been an excellent writer.

That's pretty funny that some don't see the point. Out of curiosity, if they don't see the point of chopping down the tree, why not order an artificial one?


Ebony Lee chapter 4 . 3/10/2014
Aww, this is such a cute and heartwarming story!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2014
This is a nice story, Im glad there will be one more chapter, this one did feel like an ending. I think Kanda was probably too OOC for me in places here, but it seems you were going for a happier feel/ending so it makes sense why.
I look forward to the last chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
This is awesome, I really like the way you write the 3 as kids together.
karina001 chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
It was wonderful to read a new Needles chapter and I look forward to another. Its a nicely different aspect, this look at the Order. And most certainly entertaining.
MassivelyMinute chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
I'm so glad I found this diamond of a story during my search for good d-gray man fanfic! Who knew I'd get so lucky, searching for fic with Kanda and Lenalee. I have thoroughly enjoyed this piece, you've written the characters very believably, possibly even the most in-character gray man story I've read so far, and you're even writing them as children! To say I'm impressed is an understatement. The story it's self, too, is a charming and simple idea, but you've managed to weave such depth and detail into it that I've had trouble taking my eyes from the page. I was thrilled when I saw you last updated this fic on 06-29-13, with an update so recent (relatively) I hope that means you haven't abandoned this fic and plan on continuing it to it's conclusion. I can't wait to see how it all plays out, with Lenalee's concern for Kanda and the presents that have yet to be passed out! Even if you don't plan on finishing this piece, please know that I'm following and favoriting it. I've loved every second of reading it! Thank you for writing it, and I hope there's more writing in your future! :)
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
Excellent fanfic
DSC-Fate chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
Thanks for updating! Love this story and every chapter is really worth the wait! :)
fading ink chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
This is so very cute. I like how you've characterized young Kanda, Lenalee and Daisya It's hard to write from a child's POV, but you manage perfectly. 3 AND THE ENDING FOR THIS CHAPTER WAS THE CUTEST. I cannot wait for the next one! Please, do keep writing. This is positively heartwarming.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
This is good, Im glad you decided to continue it. Hope there will be more to come soon
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
awesome, it'd be great to read a series like this
OLunarCryO chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Goodness this was the cutest thing ever.
Great job!
AuntieS chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Wonderful kid story! Nice job on your first post for fanfiction.:)
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