Reviews for Sweet Games
Hidden Masked chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Omg! That was so so good! Like really, super AWESOME! I love how Ichigo was jealous and how Rukia replied him with 'I missed you too' in the end and the way he smiled! Gah, I LOVE EVERYTHING! 3 That was really really good! :) Thank You! :D
Kuroi-cho-tsuki-shiro chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
So sweet! I loved it! You have a really great way of describing their interactions that makes for totally compulsive reading. In both of these chapters, the details are exquisite, just down to the small gestures. I can totally see them! I particularly liked your description of Ichigo's reiatsu when he's resting in Rukia's office, that she can sense when he's relaxed and how it affects her. Lovely dialogue too. Straight to my favourites list. ;)
09ice chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
THAT was so sweet I can almost taste that chocolate myself :D

Thank you~~
great gospel chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
This was beyond perfect. I can't tell you how much I loved this. You captured their back and forth banter down pat. And can I just say that it amused me immensely to see Rukia compared to a cartoon villain? Anyway, hands down one of the BEST Bleach fics I've ever had the pleasure to stumble upon. That piece at the end capped things off flawlessly. Well done. I hope to see more work like this from you soon! Thanks for the great read,

Vera Rozalsky chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
An interesting light touch with the end, and the film-maker's eye for that last detail, the chocolate box with its remaining morsel and the delicate paper stirring in the wind. The 'open' ending, not spelling everything out, is an art itself.
Lunacat13 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
How bittersweet :) Lovely
Hidden Masked chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This was really sweet and amazing! You have just dashed your way up to become my favourite IchiRuki author! :D Love your story!
SamanthaEscalante chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I really like the way that they talk and act, its like they personality. Lovely one-shot! :B
BosRonald chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
chineschopsticks chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Ohhhh semi-kinky confession game.. Lol jk it was cute. :)
silverpendant chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Aw! This is a cute story. I love it! :)

I wonder what Rukia was going to say...

TruantPony chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Humor, nicely done.

Things I liked:

The confession and chocolate game. The way Ichigo was sharing his chocolates that _other girls_ had given to him. The idea of him 'escaping' to gorge on chocolate in the privacy of his own home, so that it doesn't reflect on his 'reputation' at school. The embarrassing stories exchanged, and in particular, the explanation on why Byakuya doesn't wear a scarf anymore. How 'propose' actually means 'impose'. I really liked that sentence, nice place on the words.


The emotional connection and deep trust. These moments are shared between them only. The disappointment when they come to the last chocolate, and the relief that Ichigo feels at finally telling her he missed her while she was away, and the subtle indications she felt the same. The way Rukia is still as devoted to duty as ever. There's poignancy, of the uneaten chocolate at the end.

All in all, very nice!


Prizz chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I like it! I expected a kiss and I find it short, but I enjoyed reading it! It makes me miss IchiRuki moments more.
pamianime chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Aww how cuuute! Dumb hollow ruining the moment Dx

Great little piece of work x)
teshichan chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Stupid hollow... Ruining the moment. I wonder what Rukia would have said? Hope you write another one for white day! :)
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