I just wanna say, thank you for all your hard work in writing this story and sharing it with all of us. I thoroughly enjoyed every moment of this story from the ups to the downs and every little plot hook and scene that took place. The final chapter felt like a good closer to a wonderful storyline. And I wish you would continue but seeing as how it's 11 years later with not much new information, I guess that would be forlorn at best. Regardless I enjoyed your story greatly and I hope some inspiration comes to you and you feel like continuing this story. Thank you again to you and your husband for all your hard work.

Ahhh I can't believe it's already done. Only the the epilogue left. This has been an amazing literary journey, reading this story as it progresses from the start of their seemingly impossible relationship going full circle and culminating to the birth of their child. This chapter was one of my favorites for sure, it's honestly funny how Holly was constantly annoyed by Artemis due to the pregnancy, the hormones and general discomfort. Its accurate to the T and just shows that not matter the father even if it's Artemis Fowl, they'll always be meek to the wife. I sincerely enjoyed this read and although this was posted many years ago, I hope you consider fan fic writing again. I would also love to participate and support you in that endeavor if you ever choose to do so.

I knew it, Juliet and No.1. Who knew she'd be such a horny dog . Hahaha. I'm happy for Artemis and Holly, that whole fakeness from the relatives is kind of sad but it's really how it feels sometimes. But I'm glad they made it past this stage and are finally entering their own relationship, not what other people want or see.

Hahaha what is with this family, Butlers' included. It's like are they all trying to end up with some fairy. Hilarious chapter, especially with Holly finding some random porno for "research"

Holly's need for speed was well and truly met. While Arty got some very delicious road head. Interesting chapter all in all. I like how Artemis and Holly are definitely showing signs of the pregnancy and it's effect on each other. Artemis is understanding the feeling and what it means to be a father. That ultrasound scene and the whole procedure was such a fatherly and caring husband who's just nervous. While Trouble you need to get the hell out and stop trying to ruin their happiness. You have your own happiness and it's not with Holly.

Bdbd

That was freaking absolutely hilarious. Minerva and Butler uncomfortably having a conversation while Artemis and Holly are fucking like mad in the room next door. My face has a grin from ear to ear the whole time. They really need to work on their volume control hahahaha. Like Buddy, I love the sounds of moans too. But comon, that was just too funny. Aww poor Butler really had to deal with that for so long.

P.s. I love Butlers new found humor and Artemis new physical activity. Instead of riding horses, Holly's busy riding him.

Whattt Holly got pregnant from Artemis? No wayyyy it's not as if they've been fucking like rabbits since they admitted their feelings to each other. Well that's exactly what happened hahaha. So what if shes an elf with a ovulation of ten years, Artemis is now a supercharged along with his little magical swimmers. Hahaha I can't wait to see where this takes us. Only 6 more chapter, say it isn't so. I can't believe I'm almost done

Ahhh what a perfect heart tugging moment. Artemis is definitely a boy in a man's body. He still doesn't know that you never win in an argument. But his tender proposal/ring giving was really cute albeit very passive. Would've love him to have surprised her directly after getting out instead of letting it be know. But what can you do when you got fairy on the brain.

A bit on the shorter side it feels. I'm excited to see what you have planned next. A powered up Artemis sounds terrifying to me too Holly. Lol

I honestly enjoy your lemon free chapters. Again as I stated before I feel like it's a perfect spot to just add that little bit of drama, that topping of emotion, just enough to keep us on the edge of our seats. I enjoy smut just as much as the next person, but I also really enjoy reading their developing relationship beyond purely carnal pleasure. It's a nice break and it lets us appreciate their character more.

A little side drama. My phone died yesterday, like straight up died. No longer operational due to compounding hardware software failures. And literally the only thing I could think of was, damnit I can't read the next chapter . Suffice to say I got a new phone and immediately started reading again.

Yay Jules is back baby, the whole fowl gang is together. I love the surprise she has from the suddenly realization of both her memories and that Artemis and Holly are together. I wonder what Artemis has planned for the future and how Holly feels about the wedding. As always beautiful writing from your part and wonderful editing from your husband. When I read your story my brain automatically just gives the character their voice and it's so simple because you portray their behaviors so well. A bit more cursing but that's because they're adults now. I'm sad I'm now counting down the number of chapters left.

I left reviews since the very first chapter and I'm not gonna stop now. I honestly wish I discovered you when you first started re-releasing this story, so that I could be one of the driving forces that helped spur you to release more chapters. Saying that, I also really enjoy not having to wait for the next chapter haha. I'm very committed to your story and to me it's already head canon. That sweet sweet revenge is actually something I did with my girlfriend the last year at my job haha. Except we did clean up the mess, so I was laughing so hard at seeing something like that play out in written form. Again I appreciate all your hard work and your husband hard work as an editor. I will continue to read your story and I'm sad I'm already at the halfway mark. Onwards!

You really just had to play with my feelings. The chapter before was already a wild ride. But this one, you made me really believe Artemis forgot everything, even though it lasted two lines. I enjoy this reconciliation and I'm glad that the council aren't full of bigots who would try to get in the way of their relationship. Overall very much a happy ending and I can't wait to keep reading

Literally at the edge of my seat. Everytime, you tease my emotions and play with my feelings. Poor Holly, I can feel her hurt and when she finally found out the truth. Ugh what a heart string puller. I love how much it hurts but I still their relationship.