Bravo you need an award for writing this stuff I mean it's just some good

This is a great chapter.

Bloody hell, Kelp! That's a serious invasion of privacy, and Holly isn't your responsibility and she sure as hell isn't your property
I know he likes Holly but I'm having a lot of trouble feeling bad for him righ now tbh

Damn just damn

I often come back to this story, as it’s among the greatest love stories I’ve ever read, if not the best. Top 3, guaranteed. It’s very likely to be the best. I read it repeatedly because I really enjoy the basis in the reality of a relationship; I can see how you’ve put your own experience into it, and it pays off beautifully. This is a masterpiece of writing

so good

This brought me on a journey and I'm sad to have finished it. Very well done.

I came for the porn and stayed for the plot. Such a perfect balance of smut and story! Be proud of this beautiful piece of art you wonderful human being

not gonna lie i almost stopped reading at chapter 11

I forgot just how much smut this had. This was a wonderfully pleasant fic, drowning me in fluff and romance. In fact, everything about this was wonderfully amusing!

Great fic! Good work!

Refined.
I love this.

That was such a sweet story! I loved how you portrayed Holly and Artemis.

Did you finish your sequel?

My tender half had such an easy pregnancy that it was the best time of our lives. It's the after that was hard to deal with. When you figure that you won't have sex for the next 16 years...

I think they found their favorite passtime: hanky-panky.