Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events |
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![]() ![]() That was fucking evil, but Trouble deserved it |
![]() ![]() Mulch did work for the mob in The Eternity Code |
![]() ![]() ![]() No criticisms (I don't do that crap) but it made me cringe when you miss typed No1 as No.1 |
![]() ![]() That was weird, epic, and slightly creepy, but cool nonetheless |
![]() ![]() This story gets to a point where no one is old enough to read it. But that's how I like it |
![]() ![]() LOL indeed. |
![]() ![]() The only thing I can think to say is as follows, WHAT DA FUCK! |
![]() ![]() MAKE. !(Unless you want to get creamed;]) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! If you are still receiving notifications of reviewers and such, please email me at with information regarding the sequel, I've had since trouble finding information about it. Thanks for all your hard work on the story. -Clover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! Unlike most other guys, i love a good lactation fetish. Wasn't overly done, simply perfect! Gonna miss your storeys for sure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, there's a couple things I'd like to say about this one, not sure if anyone us still notified about the new reviews our anything, but first off, AMAZING story. Absolutely, THE BEST AF fanfic I've ever read. Now onto the chapter aspects. First, i originally laughed atty Myles' conversation with Minerva, calling him a player then called him "mini Kelp". Loved it. Second, loved the kinky sit between Juliet and No. 1. Would love to see the story branch off to go more on depth about them, but it is what it is. And lastly, i simply adored the overall humor included in thus one. I had to stop to laugh, or rather cackle, several runes during reading this installment. Please, no matter what the content is or who you do it for, please,PLEASE don't ever stop writing. You have a gift that I know many, myself included, envy greatly. Don't waste it. (Of you're interested, and if you ever read this, I'm on a great story site, , that would greatly welcome you and your writing. Feel fee to email me at if you get this, have anything to daddy, all or whatever.) Thanks for all your hard work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, No. 1 DID say it'd be interesting to date outside his species... |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE! |
![]() ![]() This story is just amazing. It really sounds like this is from an actual book. Amazing descriptive with very minimal grammar errors fascinating if i must say. You should become an author, you would be excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, is about damn time! |