Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Um... What? Canon-twist alert! Great idea, seriously. I almost wish it was canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stand very much corrected. THAT was the best Artolly lemon I've ever read. I don't think I could write a better one if you put the words in my mouth. For the love of god, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so that is hands down the single best artolly lemon I've ever read. Please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you would come back and create an After Story about above ground life for them. I like your writing style and you have a very creative take on certain attributes of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know what ring you're taking about, its just gorgeous. Onto 18 |
![]() ![]() ![]() David Copperfield has NOTHING on Artemis! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Onto the next chappy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Juliet's not a clueless killer blonde anymore! |
![]() ![]() This is honestly one of the best stories on fan in general, damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this at 2:30, i damn near woke the entire household I laughed so heard. You my fear, are a fucking GENIUS! That message on the panties? Brilliant! Never cease to amuse and amaze me with your creative talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! I was seething throughout all of Kelp's bullshit, and literally wanted to be able to climb into the story so i could beat his ass to a bloody fucking pulp. But then you turned the Council against him very quickly, leaving him a blubbering mess. You write with such fiery passion, ours amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucifermotherfuckingdammit! What. The. Actual. Fuck!? I'm sitting here reading, engulfed, planned into the story, query my as off that Holly will make it there alive, and for their relationship, and you leave us on a cliffhanger like THAT!? How is this not a published story? (yeah, i know, you can't publish it due to copyright blah blah blah) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn that's deep shit, just like every relationship has it's hardships, but this is just brutal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Holly, Sorry I couldn't stay. Someday we'll go home together. You belong with me. Love, AF." In that very moment she had the answer to Trouble's question. Why she chose Artemis over him. Artemis said "with" when Trouble said "to". It made all the difference. Fuck that's harsh. But, it DOES show why she chose Arty over Trouble |
![]() ![]() You sick at writing, bitch |