Another tear jerker for me. The fight sank home to me because you really captured what a relationship is like. It's not always sunshine and rainbows, but it's the bumps and tough choices in a relationship that help make it persevere. I hope Holly and Artemis make up, he was definitely in the wrong though for speaking those words so hurtfully. My girlfriend would call it being a unfair fighter since Artemis was bringing up things that Holly has no control over and yet blamed her, hurtfully too.

Honestly canon we knew Holly and Trouble had a relationship of sorts but even in the novel it was very much just a casual one that ended. But you took a spin on it and made Trouble into the jealous possessive type really makes him a great villain (a much hated one). I'm really interested to see where you take this story, what is Artemis going to do now? The next chapter awaits!

I'll say this again, but I really enjoy and love reading your non-lemon/smut chapters. You really use the time well to flush out the relationship, fill in the environment and bring about an overall sense of completeness. I love the way you portrayed Fowl manor, I understood that the manor was large based on the books but you added your own touch to it and flushed out in even greater detail. I enjoy the family interactions with Holly and it's all the more bittersweet that she is leaving. 10/10 chapter, definitely a great read. I look forward to reaching each and every chapter, probably multiple times.

You're an amazing writer

Was the Lemon hot? Most definitely. A little dominatrix Holly completely riding herself to oblivion on a struggling Artemis. Honestly wouldn't mind trying something like that myself. Hoping Trouble gets his just desserts, creep.

Poor jealous Trouble. Honestly I know he's being played out to be the villain but it's hard not to dislike how his character is being portrayed. A stand up righteous guy but the jealous abusive type (getting drunk red flag). Very well written as always. Maybe one of my least likes chapters so far but more because of Trouble being such a brat

I won't even lie, but I'm on the edge of my seat reading every chapter you're written so far. And I hope these messages somehow find their way to you. I absolutely love your writing style and thanks to your husband for helping with the editing, God knows when I write things I wish I had an editor. I do love how you managed to hit home a few points despite not even know about Atlantis complex and it lined up so well and in the more recent the last guardian, I feel like if your story was actual cannon it could be the perfect tie in.

Highlight of this chapter for me was your original character, Commander Frieya was a complete badass. I love how she Trouble hard and was open to Artemis for all the good he's actually done.

I really loved this chapter. No lemons was completely fine and it helped flush our their whole relationship dynamic even more. I absolutely died when Butler said they could hear from the kitchen. Gosh Holly you need to control yourself haha. And I shed a few tears when Holly came to realize what a relationship with Artemis meant and that he would be a fleeting part of it even if she loved him to death. Now the ending with that whole Kelp and Foaly finding out, I have qualms with. Not with you as an author but for Kelp thinking he can own Holly, she isn't anybody's women except her own.

Oh poor Butler, he's gonna have to go and clean this mess up knowing full well what those two just did. But you're right this was a wonderful chapter full of unrestrained lust and a light touch of comedy

I love this chapter so much for the type of frustrated feeling you get when you find yourself in a relationship but can't see or meet the person. It really speaks of a sort of young forbidden love. And I could definitely see Holly being the type to sneak over

I know this story is from well over 15 years ago, but I only recently discovered it and I really enjoy the read. I can honestly feel the representation of the characters here and I love it. Thanks for all your hard work and I hope this message still reaches you.

I made an account so that I could write this review and thank you for your dedication and hard work

Wow. Great. But I think Foaly should have been jerking off at them.

Butler is going to need a mop, so funny for no apparent reason 6 out of 5 stars

Damn, now Artemis has to face a jealous Kelp

This is random, but I love how you wrote that Artemis "Sloppily scratched" a note, and then when Holly finds it, it's "Eloquently scripted in perfection." Artemis thinks he's just being quick and messy, but Holly sees perfection.

wayyyy too intense with the spanking and the fact that arty got sex hair...