Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events
AsynchronousTextureStreaming chapter 14 . 11/9/2016
If Juliet has to knock on doors, how is she supposed to be a body guard? She would knock on every door she walks through and that would give her position away in convert missions she does as a body guard.
Banshee534 chapter 6 . 10/25/2016
Holly said that a hybrid relationship had happened before, and commander Freiya had stated ' " To my knowle'dge, Commander Kelp, there is nothing in the book nor in the Council's laws that forbids a fairy from kissing anyone or anything they damn well please!" she yelled at him''. So HOW THE FUCK IS HE PLANNING ON GETTING THE COUNCIL TO AGREE THAT THEIR RELATIONSHIP SHOULDN'T BE ALLOWED TO EXIST?! While this may be a fanfic, thus its ABSOLUTELY 100% like Trouble. And it just PISSES ME THE FUCK OFF!
Banshee534 chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
WHAT?! NO! Their weekend was going (relatively) perfectly! Trouble can't coffee in and fuck it all up!
Shit, i almost never get attached to characters, and here you have me worrying for Holly. Leo up the amazing work
Banshee534 chapter 3 . 10/23/2016
I know I'm quite late, but i absolutely lived thus series when i first find it years ago, and now i finally found it again - competed! Thank you do much for creating something like this for it's to read for free, i know some authors out there will only post to sites that give them profit. So once again, thank you fit this amazing fanfic.
Bowie Wren chapter 9 . 10/18/2016
Not E. O. It's E. C.
Bowie Wren chapter 8 . 10/18/2016
Great plot line! However, it is EXTREMELY out of character for Artemis to make a mistake in grammar as you've had him do in falsely correcting Holly on the plural forms of genius. (Still loving it though!)
Bowie Wren chapter 5 . 10/17/2016
Wow! Your story is incredibly believable in regard to the series! I can tell you really know your stuff. Please continue to write with as much care and style as you have so far. I look forward to reading it!
Guest chapter 24 . 10/17/2016
I cannot find out how to do the mp3 pod fic
Pinowlgi chapter 24 . 9/29/2016
well now i gotta fidn this sequal!
Pinowlgi chapter 20 . 9/28/2016
damnit woman you're making me want babies!
Pinowlgi chapter 19 . 9/28/2016
duly warned lol. looking forward to all the ups and downs of kids in muly future. hubby and i arent quite ready yet. and is it totally terrible if me to have wanted a minerva/butler lemon here?
Pinowlgi chapter 12 . 9/27/2016
i almost reviewed every fre paragraphs. totally thought Trouble was gonna attack Artemis!
Pinowlgi chapter 11 . 9/27/2016
oh sheeeit! NOT what i was expecting!
Pinowlgi chapter 6 . 9/26/2016
well shit
Pinowlgi chapter 5 . 9/26/2016
awwww sheeeeit. shits bout ta go DOWN! love it, totally addicted!
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