| Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events |
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  TheKingsCrown chapter 15 . 6/12/2016 Yes! No more gagging and vomiting. Smut Free! |
 GrimIsaac chapter 11 . 6/13/2016 "I'll see you in hell" ... You're bad LOL |
| Ararararagi-san chapter 2 . 6/8/2016 So I am revisiting one of my more liked stories, and I now have to ask myself, how did I like this in the first place? You have Holly speaking in her regular tone, but with plot centered motives, and then Artemis acting like Bill Gate's pubescent representative. Then we have a Mother who could not have possibly raised Artemis in contrast (to the point of becoming the Foil of) to the personality of Artemis. This setup makes NONE of the characters the least bit relatable which is already kind of hard to do with the inferspecies foreign relations plot. This is by far one of the worst introductions to the first act, which is why I still marvel at how you managed to pull through with the story. |
| Anonymous chapter 21 . 5/27/2016 Yep, and I cant wait for her to find out what he is and for Butler to scare the shit out of him |
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 5/27/2016 Awwwww, ickle Arty gonna be a daddy |
| Anonymous chapter 18 . 5/27/2016 HOOOOOOOOOOOOO! That is how you drop "The Bomb" |
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 5/24/2016 BWAHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!, Trouble got his acorns crushed by Holly, HEEHEEEEEHEEEEHEEHEEHEEHEE! |
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 5/24/2016 HAAAAAAAA |
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 Actually it would be awesome if they got Artemis to cuss |
| Samwise Marivill chapter 24 . 5/18/2016 I loved this story. Artemis and Holly had to go through a lot to get to where they are now, and while i looked around at some other stories, this was my favorite. I liked how it felt real. Also, I kinda liked Holly and Artemis when they were... younger. You are a wonderful writer. And i'm not just saying that because I don't want to let you down; I really am the author of several books, (This is just a penname) and yours was exceptional. I don't know if you'll ever read this, but I wrote it all the same. Ever the fan, S.C.M. |
| Hartemis shipper chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 Great story I actually clicked on the link to your Profile to look for more keep is up wish I could write this good |
| Hilda chapter 6 . 3/30/2016 An adult wrote this stuff? I thought it was a kid! |
| Woodeywood9 chapter 24 . 3/31/2016 I have to say, I have read all the books and they kept me wanting more and more. This did just that, I loved every second of it. You are a brilliant writer and I am looking foward to more of your works. |
| TheVirtualAuthor chapter 2 . 3/28/2016 I am actually kinda liking this. Pretty good. |
| Alex chapter 10 . 3/23/2016 I will fucking kill you if Trouble has sex with Holly. |