Very well written

I can’t believe how much this made me laugh, keep up the good work

never write again you unless you actually know how you. fucking nazi.

best fanfic ever!1

amazing! and i defo dont want holly to kill me

If Holly is okay with it (which she was, she asked for it) then I have no complaints

never write again you unless you actually know how you. fucking nazi's alright.

My favorite Artemis Fowl sex story. Keep up the good work :)

You disgusting pervert

I wanna say thank you for creating these chapters. I grew up reading these books and always felt there should be other chapters and honestly I think you did an amazing job. All of the different creative smut and non-smut. Freaking phenomenal work. I also know this is 8 years old and you might not see my comment. But thank you!

Actualy Artemis ancestors marring a fairy might be cannon after all. Its stated in last gaurdian that faires are attracted to fowl manor for centuries.

I really like your novel. I mean most people hate fanfic and think people reading them are weirdos, but its soooo awesome to imagine alternate realities and what if's the fanfic author's answer. Please write more of artemis fowl, i really loved it.

Try to use names less. In a paragraph use it once and then use another way to reference the character.

Example:
Butler made his way to the kitchen before stopping in shock. The Eurasian giant was surprised to see Holly in one of the chairs of the large table in the middle of the room.

Ever since finding this story I have read it or parts of it everyday and this is like day 20 or something. It is a hilarious well written story that I wish would inspire the author to write a similar story that would be cannon.

Peel should be peal