Eatimg rice doesn't kill birds.

You should remove the homophobic-sounding part of this chapter.

Put in one more chapter that says what happens in which chapter

This is amazing You have one of the most creative mind in history. I post the review as a representative for all other chapters. Im sure Eoin Colfer never thought of the idea of partnering and stuff. This is the most wonderful stuff Ive read in a long time. It could almost be a book itself if there were no copyright laws.

Awesome this author is amazing

Nice story

I have a story too that does not relate to this at all but I want to put it out there so I can say I have.

Once there was a nation called Soap it was ruled by a single party and had a very corrupt minister called Jon spik. General James McFadden decided he should stage a coup to remove the party and Jon spik from power however the coup failed mcfadden’s role was not discovered so he remained a general. He decided he had to get creative and caused a revolution contributing large amounts of weapons to revolutionaries he sent troops not loyal to him to deal with it and used this to stage a second coup this time he was successful and declared himself the leader however the revolutionaries didn’t want him to be the leader they wanted one of thier high ranking members to be the new leader. They tried to negotiate but he was extremely uncompromising and wouldn’t negotiate as a result the revolutionaries got angry and storm the house of ministers the equivalent of the Houses of Parliament or the House of Representatives. Initially the general kept them back as he was an amazing strategist however one of his own troopers shot him in the jaw before fleeing to the revolutionaries taking off his armour to show to was with them the general survived the wound but lost the ability to speak as a result without his leadership his forces where defeated and he was captured. He was exucuted. What makes this story ironic is that he caused the revolution and had he joined them as a high ranking member he would have become the new minister due to making the revolution possible so moral of the story don’t try to stop a revolution right after you preformed a coup.

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10/10 *will* read again. Fucking masterpiece.

Ma'am, I pursue your fanfic, you are creator of sex. I need big cock for the madam. Yes, I am cumming at the thought.

grape but without the g

geeys what is sex

You forgot a period after the very last sentence. Extremely well written!

So we’ll written! 5 stars!

Good story

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