Reviews for Little Pieces of My Heart
MarinaNamaste chapter 1 . 4/29
What an extraordinary way to use conversation hearts! I especially liked the bite me one. You gave us some Exciting tension. And a happy ending. What a wonderful one shot. Well done.
teamjacob0729 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
This is sweet and lovely. She was creative and giving. You are completely creative and giving! I loved the candy hearts and her silence. I loved the visual of Jake dancing. Just fun and young love finally welcoming and embracing their love.
Leppy99 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Awwwww so cute
Love it
U should continue this story
VJM130899 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
how cute nd romantic
jake is such a qt

u write amazing stories
I gtg finish readin ur other stories
luv ya
3 /(_)/
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Sooooo cute
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Love how you too something a bit awkward from canon and made it sweet and sexy as it should have been in SM world.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Awww that was so sweet! What a great idea with the candy hearts.
I laughed out loud at Jake doing the wiggle dance.
This one's a winner to me hon.
Gillian Cooke chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
I've read this story many times. It's very creative, cute, and plausible had twilight taken a different path. Nice job :)
Kraftychik chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Loved it! I'd play that game with him any day! I just wish she had told him Happy V-Day too. :)
Ravenspetater1032 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Loved it! It almost made me feel like I should do that with my boyfriend but I was thinking about it on Valentine's Day when he gave me a box of hearts and I was like 'Nah, I'll do it later.'
codiroo chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Loved this story!
Zayide chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This was just insanely awesome! So cute...and so Jake and Bella!

Perfectly done!
Jeri252 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
love it
lilsealsfriend chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
nicely done!
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