Reviews for Heart of Model W
Heika chapter 2 . 6/4
Why is Ashe’s match so different from the other user’s of Model W? She looks like a human sized version of some of Omega’s artwork.

Does she have wings on her back or does her arms turn into wings?

Instead of the underground base she'd grown up in, a palace of utter resplendence
Don’t use instead at the start of both lines.

Heika chapter 1 . 6/2
Can I ask for this to be AsheFemHarem? at the very least I would like to see AshePandora.

Why did Albert call his son/clone a failure? the fact he beat Pandora would suggest otherwise.
TyrantChimera chapter 4 . 1/21
Damn, you almost had me hopeful there for someone watching through the forest, but I gues the 'hidden-Big-Bad" is still stuck in his cave. Wah.
OMEGA ZX 420 chapter 5 . 9/13/2015
Aww. I was steely getting into the story at this point. Well, at the very least you haven't totally abandoned it. I look forward to the re-telling!
FireDragonX23 chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
Glad to see you're still around
The True Skull chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
you live again say dop you remember me? I hope you still recall our pms regarding the raiders X3
Zohaku chapter 5 . 9/6/2015
I hope it will come soon.

The plot is pretty interesting.
The Unplanner chapter 6 . 9/6/2015
Seriously, ma'am? Two chapters in a row consisting of hiatus announcments? Here's a hint: Updating your story makes it rise to the top of our favorite stories lists. We'll know when you've returned, and we'll read your chapter when it actually comes out. Please remove these hiatus notes when an actual chapter comes up, so any newcomers won't be turned away by them. I'm still going to read this, but I was hoping for something to actually read when this story bumped up to the top of my list for the first time in more than three years.
nitpick chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
Prometheus (and Pandora for that matter) are both Model W users. There's actually a little image of it when you get the Cipher for beating Thetis in Advent. "In order to find a Biomatch for Biometal Model W, first I created sibling Reploids. As well as giving them a portion of Model W's power," unquote. And they have the little Weil-shaped Model W things floating in front of them.
Ignis Vitae chapter 5 . 4/2/2013
It's been nearly a year... and this is one of the best Mega Man fanfics I've read on this website. Are you going to finish this? Update soon, please!
Pardra chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I'm not familiar with the ZX series, but it's part of my policy to review at least one of my reviewers' works. I have to say I like your writing style.
The Unplanner chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Wow, this is great! I'm glad you reviewed my story, because otherwise I wouldn't have found yours!
Shadow Sora94 chapter 5 . 6/13/2012
Awww, that's unfortunate D:

Got a real good story though, keep it up when ya get back to it! Really like how you got your Ashe working out, always liked the idea of her being a Raider over a Hunter, especially her Model W/Corrupted/Berserk state! Friggin' awesome! Really like the way you've been going with this, don't know when you'll continue, but when it does, sure it'll be enjoyable c:!
Zohaku chapter 4 . 6/8/2012
Things are getting pretty interesting.
jab chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
Aww jeez. I was hoping for new chapter. Did you take down your darker ending story btw? Right. Unable to answer. Sorry. Well hope you come back soon. :(
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