|Reviews for Golden|
| Fastern chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
This story was simple, short, and drabble-ish, but had an incredible punch. You used your words nicely. This is one of those stories that doesn't need to be long and drawn out to say a lot. I didn't see any notable spelling or grammar whatsoever and you seem to have all the technicalities down.
This was really, really good. Keep it up.