|Reviews for Amnesia: Gary's Descent|
| Merper chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I guess it COULD of been a good story... I just thought it could be more uhh... Amnesia-like and not all shitty-like. But I'll give you credit for trying!
| heart-charm chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Although I strongly enjoy this -it's your first fan-fiction right?- I do think the writing could use some work. Considering that fact you've also not PLAYED 'Amnesia' yet, I can see it could be confusing.
Some parts in this short, short prologue, fall flat to me. I suggest more descriptions. Don't follow my footsteps and copy each and every motion, 'K? ;-)