|Reviews for Shard|
| Pergjithshme chapter 1 . 3/9
Well that was depressing.
| StarzAngelus chapter 1 . 3/4
This was beautiful. And it hit me right in the heart. [ugly crying]
| yummyjellybean chapter 1 . 2/24
I like the comment about the happier version being Fallen Star :)
| Petra Frinson chapter 1 . 2/23
Ok, how many dimensions are there that need to be sewn up? I mean, there was Fallen Star and the one where the other version of Jane tells her to find Loki and this? I'm confused.
P.S. I'm a big fan of your writing!
| Rebecky2277 chapter 1 . 2/15
This is so wunnerful! I love it!
| 0.0' Kahli hime chapter 1 . 1/25
So, so sad..
| Sarah chapter 1 . 1/12
Oh my goodness.
I feel like someone just stepped on my rib cage.
Gorgeous. That's all I can say.
| Queen Serenity chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Sad. Beautifully written.
| yaslanagirl chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I cried so hard reading this. Oh my goodness, this was heartrending. I'm glad I haven't truly started fallen star yet, because I always prefer to end with the happy version.
In case you were curious, listen to this 5mJ08-pyDLg on loop while reading, it will be even more powerful.
(that is the video id code, just plug it in after the watch?v bit of the youtube address.)
| H chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
| ummiuno011 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
WHAT IS THIS? WHY ARE MY EYES LEAKING SALT WATER? Why would you do this? And I just finished reading "Gifts" too and was all happy, and then I just crush my soul by reading this. Thanks a lot Alydia.
! #$%&*Kay Em Zee
| Born-Of-Elven-Blood chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Okay that HURT to read. You are just too good at this whole writing thing. Beautifully painful, very, very well done!
| Ali Nowac chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I'll admit, I cried a little reading this. Okay. More than a little. Anyways, I loved it and it was beautiful and you've succeeded in making me - who hardly ever cries - cry. Congrats, friend! ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Gdi and you had to add in the happier excerpts of their alternate selves.
They could've had it aaaaaaaaallllllll - *bawls*
| PeasAndCheese chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Knowing their counterparts had the better ending, just adds more hurt; like rendering my already broken heart into dust.