Reviews for After Moon Rising
Zesslover chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
UPdate this amazing story and tell us what Tykki saw! PLease?!
DrarryFrerard chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
It's a good idea but you have LOTS of grammar and spelling problems
Happycafegirl chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
please continue this its amzing i just love Yullen
drmona lord chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
Spoiler if you don't like skip this review Mana is the brother of the 14th noa
HeythereJoe chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
;D Nice, a bit fast-paced but nice. Lots of mistakes but still readable

And..aherm..if you need a beta...you can contact me at ImagineFlight...Mmmrf...Pay me in hugs and gummy bears ...
lucky dog X mad dog chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
like it hi there is this amazing bl game and it is alos a drama cd (the game and cd are in japanes but you can get the translaton on google) and manga called Lucky Dog 1 Blast or just Lucky Dog 1 but the manga is not bl it just implys it and it NEEDS MORE LOVE please cheack it out and tell others about it its about Gian Carlo Bourbon Del Monte, a young member of the mafia, is better known by his nickname "Lucky Dog" due to his incredible good luck. Despite knowing that he can escape with just a little effort, Gian decides to take a break from the fast-and-furious lifestyle while being imprisoned in a maximum-security jail. But when four young mafia captains are captured and brought to the same prison, the Boss of their syndicate makes a certain request of Gian... plz help this amazing game/manga get more attention it needs alot more love it is too good tell me what you think about it please I AM BEGGING YOU . for game and cd translations and 2010/06/23/bl-game-review-%E2%80%93%C2%A0lucky%C2%A0dog1/ read the manga too lucky-dog-1-blast PLEASE IT NEEDS MORE LOVE
esmeralda kitty cat chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Wow. this was really good! I really liked the lemon! There were a bunch of spelling mistakes but I still liked it! XD will there be another chapter? :D
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Wait you are 12 year old and already know what a lemon is?o_o Well anyway this is really good Kid. ;D
Shizaki Kuro chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Okay it was a little hard to read because of spelling and grammer errors, and because most of it was them talking, i would recommend more details to whats happening around them.

but other then that it was good so far, keep working hard!

:3