Reviews for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019
You swicted his name from Matthew to albus in the middle of the chapter... Why? You should keep it consistent or people will get confused
Gekko9 chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
3 paragraph, last sentence: ..., dawning realization that Peter had betrayed them.
TheGemNara chapter 4 . 6/9/2017
I Onyx OpalLeficent Ciphadonyx. Pledge Harry Potter to the Ancient and Noble House of Ravenclaw
ninja888 chapter 2 . 1/25/2017
Albus Severus, really? You are extremely unimaginative.
Kenji Tarugo chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
Albus Severus? Really? Are you that short in creativity that you would think that James Potter would name his son as Albus Severus? Incredibly preposterous.
HP Fangirl chapter 4 . 12/17/2015
The beginning chapters were amazing, well written, and then there was this sudden decrease in the quality of the writing... What happened? I stopped reading around chapter twelve: the chapters became shorter and poorly written... You started off so well, I was interested in this story until the A.N., then everything went down hill...
tiara123458 chapter 16 . 11/8/2015
...Its been 2 years. : Update please! This is amazing! :)
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
what about Sly
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 3 . 3/9/2015
did do not love him and they know it
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
it is cool
percab8531 chapter 16 . 2/22/2015
Continue this
Hero Dean chapter 5 . 1/28/2015
viktor krum
Witchchild1234 chapter 9 . 6/7/2014
Update some more! It's really good.
ImaGreekmyth chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
I read the bold and you keep saying Harry's twins name is Albus Severus "Sirius" but in the story it is Matthew. Could you explain to me?
Caerulum D chapter 10 . 2/4/2014
...A little short?
Still, love the story so far.
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