Reviews for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 You swicted his name from Matthew to albus in the middle of the chapter... Why? You should keep it consistent or people will get confused |
Gekko9 chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 3 paragraph, last sentence: ..., dawning realization that Peter had betrayed them. |
TheGemNara chapter 4 . 6/9/2017 I Onyx OpalLeficent Ciphadonyx. Pledge Harry Potter to the Ancient and Noble House of Ravenclaw |
ninja888 chapter 2 . 1/25/2017 Albus Severus, really? You are extremely unimaginative. |
Kenji Tarugo chapter 1 . 3/14/2016 Albus Severus? Really? Are you that short in creativity that you would think that James Potter would name his son as Albus Severus? Incredibly preposterous. |
HP Fangirl chapter 4 . 12/17/2015 The beginning chapters were amazing, well written, and then there was this sudden decrease in the quality of the writing... What happened? I stopped reading around chapter twelve: the chapters became shorter and poorly written... You started off so well, I was interested in this story until the A.N., then everything went down hill... |
tiara123458 chapter 16 . 11/8/2015 ...Its been 2 years. : Update please! This is amazing! :) |
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 4 . 3/9/2015 what about Sly |
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 3 . 3/9/2015 did do not love him and they know it |
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 it is cool |
percab8531 chapter 16 . 2/22/2015 Continue this |
Hero Dean chapter 5 . 1/28/2015 viktor krum |
Witchchild1234 chapter 9 . 6/7/2014 Update some more! It's really good. |
ImaGreekmyth chapter 2 . 4/13/2014 I read the bold and you keep saying Harry's twins name is Albus Severus "Sirius" but in the story it is Matthew. Could you explain to me? |
Caerulum D chapter 10 . 2/4/2014 ...A little short? Still, love the story so far. |