|Reviews for Reverie|
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
| Ano Crazy Adventurer chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
There were so many mistakes but I understood this fic.
I hope you'll avoid making mistakes in the future cause your story was actually kinda sweet
I've read a review, that doesn't even comment anything except critiscising, err... How to spell that? Whatever it is, do not bother any reviews that doesn't say anything to help the author improve.
Soo... Sorry cause I was rambling stuffs. I wanted to say it to you so that you'll keep on writing in the future but with improvements.
See ya later ;D!
PS: Don't check my stories. Mine are bad... *Chopper style* :P
| GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
luffy is gonna eat him out of pure love.*eats a very surprised luffy*heck that was story.