|Reviews for Bitten by Fate|
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/23
Absolutely loved it!
| LDR chapter 33 . 2/23
Wow! You had their personalities basically perfect! That's amazing. You're such a talented writer! If the sequel is posted, I will read it without hesitation!
-LDR, Ranger 52, Pennsylvania Fief
| Legolas Dragon Ranger chapter 5 . 2/22
Haha, I can totally picture Halt as a vampire! You are a great writer. I am really drawn into this!
-LDR, Ranger 52, Pennsylvania Fief, creature: Dragon (use magic to change form)
PS- there! Can I be in to story to?
| Christinelovbooks chapter 33 . 2/5
loved this story!
| Phoenix chapter 33 . 2/1
Please write a squel. Liked it better than the original rangers apprentice. Not sure if that's a good thing considering you only wrote one. (Hint hint)
| Absolute Path APS chapter 33 . 1/25
Friggin awesome story.
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/18
Major plot twist
| Boingaboo chapter 1 . 1/15
will there be a sequel?
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/14
and his horse is Blaze! hahaha- funny!
| SpottedOwl88 chapter 33 . 11/30/2013
MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!* puppy dog eyes that make you suddenly want to write a 2nd book *
| WinterWildfire chapter 33 . 11/29/2013
I know this was finished a while ago, but I loved it so much I had to review. :D
I was extremely impressed, you managed to write a story about vampires, werewolves, fairies, and RA and somehow didn't completely ruin it. All the characters were more or less in charater, it was amazing. :)
| SpottedOwl88 chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
Alda, Bryn, and Jerome had beaten Horace almost unconcious. They called him things like "big bayby" and forced him to do physicaly esausting things. Horace whipped their buts with a drill sword though, he just used an upper hand punch to defeat Alda. All of this happened in "Ranger's Apprentice book one: The Ruins of Gorlan". I pracically memorized the book!
| SpottedOwl88 chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
U know that Halt is a main character, right?
| ScbaStv chapter 33 . 10/21/2013
I absolutely loved this. You are quite the amazing writer. I can't wait to start reading the sequel. Till next time :)
| Pichicha123 chapter 33 . 10/19/2013
It was cool, what I don't understand is why you didn't make Will's werewolf side more active? If you made it so that he could turn into a werewolf at any point he chose it would be proving that werewolves aren't entirely mindless beasts. It seems a bit lame that the only thing Will can use with his werewolf side, is that spells like the mermaids or the kalkara's gaze don't work on him. Maybe you should give him an alternative werewolf form, the form of a regular wolf albeit bigger and with actual awareness and have him act as a tracker. Also if you continue this, it would be interesting to see the Skandian's reaction to a werewolf Will, it would be even better if magical creatures didn't exist in Skandia and the Skandians didn't know about his lycanthropy (werewolfism). That would be pretty cool considering how superstitious Skandians are, they could think Will was some kind of demon or something.