Reviews for The Coraline Chronicles: Book 1: Axis of Shadow
J.M chapter 22 . 7/7/2013
Great chapter! Gave me creeps haha. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
Thranduil's Party Moose VIII chapter 22 . 7/4/2013
Amazing so far. I really missed you, I really need to update more often because its driving me INSANE. Oh... wait a second I already am insane.
LillyGirl310 chapter 22 . 7/4/2013
Another great chapter and I am sure they will get put of there alive and do all the stuff they planed to do.
Please update soon and I wil review again.
Till Next Time
Woodswolf chapter 21 . 6/9/2013
"P-Please, Grandma! It's me!" Wybie exclaimed, struggling in vain to pull his arm out of her hold. "Please don't do this!"
"I am not your grandmother, Wyborne," the ghoulish puppet replied in a gravelly tone, as she unceremoniously dragged him toward the copy of his house. "I'm sorry it has to be this way."

-

What she saw instead, however, was her button-eyed copy offering a hand to her. She took it and climbed to her feet.
"What are you doing?" she whispered.
"Helping a friend," the Other Coraline said softly.

-

WAIT A SECOND. LESSEE WHO ELSE SHOWED SYMPATHY THAT'S AN OTHER.
I CAN COUNT ON ONE HAND.

OTHER FATHER.
OTHER WYBIE.

THERE'S GONNA BE MASS MURDER HERE PRETTY QUICK AND DON'T YOU DENY IT.
YES THERE ISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SS.

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She smiled as she pressed three buttons into the other girl's hand. Coraline looked down and saw that they were the ghost eyes of Emily and Joshua. She reverently placed them in the pocket of her raincoat, reuniting all four of them.
"I want to help you to stop her," the living doll continued. "Once she's gone, you and Wybie will be safe. And then we can all live happily here forever!"

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AND THEN THERE WAS TREASON.

OM: HERESY! HERESY HERESY HERESY HERSEY!

Me: KILL THESE KIDS ALREADY DO IT DO IT DO IT

OM: IMMA TRYING! STAHP IT!

Me: TRY HARDARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

OM: I JUST THREW MY SERVANT INTO TEH BATTLE SO YOU SNEAK UP BEHIND AND KILL TEH KIDS

Me: NUUUUUUUUUUUU U HAVE TO DO IT U IN TEH FICTIONAL UNIVERSE

OM: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

OM: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Tumblrbot: What's your favorite color?

OM: ...

Me: ...Has it gained sentience?

Tumblrbot: Hello there. What's your favorite color?

Me: ...

OM: ...

Me: ...What were we talking about?

OM: ...

Tumblrbot: What's your favorite color?

Me: PURPLE GODDAMMIT NOW GET OUT

*Tumblrbot has left*

OM: THANK YOU

Me: So what were we talking about?

OM: I remember.

Me: What?

OM: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

OM: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA a
LillyGirl310 chapter 21 . 6/8/2013
Another great chapter as always and it looks like Coraline has hers hands full with the Other Miranda but I know she can take her out and safe Wybie before it is too late and he gets buttons sewn onto his eyes.
Please update soon and I will review again.
Till Next Time
Victoria618 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
This is great! I really love this story and its so refreshing to find a story that has great dialogue, plot, writing, and characterization. I really liked how you made Coraline tough/spunky but still has insecurities and fears...she feels so real (unlike other fanfics that make her "ironwoman" essentially.) Anyways, I am excited to know what happens next and I really hope you keep updating! :D
Woodswolf chapter 20 . 5/22/2013
Well, Coraline, seems you barely escaped death...

...only to be faced with a more certain one.

You have the worst luck, you know that? Worst luck.

You're probably going to have to collect your due, even though you refused it, soon. There's almost no way you're getting out of this one without it.

And where has Wybie wandered off to, anyhow? If you stay too far apart for too long... it might be a case of one or the other. Hehehehehehe...
LillyGirl310 chapter 20 . 5/22/2013
I am glad that Coraline has found the ghost children's eyes but the fact she has been found by the Beldam is bad I can only guess what she has planed for Coraline as a pushiment.
Please update soon and I will review again.
Till Next Time
Aryck1095 chapter 19 . 4/17/2013
So, the Other Coraline might not be as evil as we thought... or is she? Damn cliffhanger... Can't wait for Part 2!
Woodswolf chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
Coraline, there is something in the room.

In the future, anyway.

In the room in the future, there is a corpse.
LillyGirl310 chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
Oh no that is not good I hope that Coraline is going to be ok and that she can escape from all this unharmed.
Please update soon and I will review again
Till Next Time
Kiwi Werewolf chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
Damn you cliffhanger! But an excellent addition to an amazing story! I loved the character progression Coraline went through and the dialogue and generally just everything! Yay!
Reader chapter 18 . 4/8/2013
Ah! So good! More!
LillyGirl310 chapter 18 . 4/1/2013
Oh dear things are not looking good for the pair but they need to stick together or they will lose everything.
Please update soon and i will review again.
Till Next Time
Woodswolf chapter 18 . 4/1/2013
Coraline. Were you listening? He found a way out, and distracted the Other Coraline long enough to make her stop thinking about it.

But no, the only thing you see is a budding romance in Conspiracy Land.

And you've screwed over all your chances of getting out.

Nice Job Breaking It, Hero.
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