Reviews for Regrets
foureyedbabe chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
The end is so sweet! I loved it!
LuffyMarra chapter 6 . 3/18/2012
Great story. I really liked it. Will you be updating 'Afterparty' soon?
Kassandra Black chapter 6 . 3/5/2012
Oh, wow, this was so powerful. I loved it so much. You conveyed both Kaidan's and Shepard's feelings so perfectly. I especially liked how Shepard brushes past Kaidan after she gets into the cargo hold. Can't wait to read more! :D
Lossefalme chapter 6 . 3/5/2012

OMG. Seriously, you freakin made me tear up at the end, bah! When she says his name and he grabs her and she cries and he tells her it will be okay I totally choked up! Well done indeed! ... that... rarely happens to me while reading. :P LOL. I absolutely love how you tied the first chapter and last chapter together with the alive/living thing. Last line of this chapter is classic and brilliant. And I love this scene between them because as I mentioned, I'm very curious to see how their reunion is handled in-game. I hope its not too fast or too slow. (Picky, aren't we? LOL) But I think something like this would actually work very well. There's potential for their reunion to be ridiculously complicated... but then there's potential for something like this, which I think is so sweet and touching and also true to the characters. Just fantastic. Great little fic, can't wait for the ME3 ones! :D
Dorkolicious chapter 6 . 3/4/2012
Beautifully written, I really felt for the characters! Yay almost there ME3 woo!
Lossefalme chapter 5 . 3/3/2012
Agh. The angst. ;) The reunion between the two is probably what has me the most intriqued for Mass Effect 3. I am intensely curious as to how BioWare will handle that. There are some serious issues that need to be worked out, one way or another. Of course there is always fanfic if it doesn't live up to expectations, but I like what you did with it here. Simple, yet powerful. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
semper paratis chapter 5 . 3/3/2012
I really liked this one because I've been wondering for anwhile now how the Kaiden thing will be handled if Shepard was with someone else in me2. It could be potentially very interesting.
anonymime chapter 4 . 3/2/2012
Oh this is a nice little fix right before the release ;) I am actually really enjoying the use of second person throughout, even in this chapter. Can't wait for the last bit.
pookakitten chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
I'm enjoying the story but the use of a second person narrator is less than effective.
Aya001 chapter 3 . 2/27/2012
thanks for the new chapter! _
ilmiopassato chapter 3 . 2/26/2012
This is so good dude, you don't even know. xD Can't wait till ME3!
Lossefalme chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
akwjeafsdfjalskdjflaksdj! AH! _

Lovely little fic here! I finally played the demo and then immediately came over here to read this ficlet since I got the alert in my email a few days ago. In fact your fic was what prompted me to finally play the demo and WOW am I glad I did! WOOT WOOT! I love how you did this... short and sweet, yet you manage to convey powerful emotions and scenery in very few words. Very well done. I also like Kaidan's thought processes here. Very very nice. Will there be more? I forgot to look at if this was listed as completed or not... but regardless, I look forward to reading more of this or just more of your stories in general, so either way I am happy! :) HOORAY for Mass Effect 3! ... almost here!
MissDefender93 chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
I really really like this piece. I mean it shows the side of Kaidan that cares for Shepard. It's a really nice - Good job on this one!
Kryptocow chapter 3 . 2/18/2012
Oh man. Love Kaidan being torn between panic and tamping it down with his sense of duty and What Has To Be Done.
Republic Of Gamers chapter 3 . 2/18/2012
Fantastic, once again. I can't begin to tell you how much I appreciate you writing these. You capture Kaidan's emotional struggle with being a former lover, a soldier, and a human being in a state of panic. Except, as me know, Kaidan doesn't panic, and you show that well. Seriously love it. Do continue!

These make my day.
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