Reviews for Flying on your Wings
theunhappytwins chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
This reminds me oddly of Desert Bluebird...
OrangeTsundere chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
Awwww... sad but well-written story. Oh, what does "matane" mean? You wrote it at the end.
CatPhones chapter 5 . 7/7/2012
I read all 4 chapters and found it to be really interesting! So sad that it's the end ;-; Anyways, I request more insight on Gakupo, Luka, Kaito, and Miku (a.k.a the scientists) in the After Story w A sequel would be nice too xD
Oh yeah, I think this needs more reviews!
But I believe that most people here in this fandom loves romance and school life more... Now don't kill me for that people w I talk from experience with writing here. Romance fics tend to be more popular...
T.T chapter 4 . 5/18/2012
This...this is soooooo great

I love this so much

But, why does Len has to die?
LenxRin4eva chapter 4 . 4/16/2012
Nice story! But why must Len die D': you made me cry, damn you. Hope to hear more from you i look forward to the After Stories...please tell us more about Len and Rin's lives, i am curious..

Good job, love your stories. Keep writing!
CrazyMikoHanyouKagamineRin chapter 4 . 4/14/2012
I love it when I learn things I don't know. I cried at the end. Loved your story!

Keep on Writing!

Rin
SmoochiPon chapter 4 . 4/2/2012
Woow! Amazing story ;)

1 question... Were the afflicted zombies or what? (Sorry.. I'm south-american and some words may be weird for me)
AliyeH chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
Yay, two chapters! *-*

Thank goodness Miku had kept herself alive; if she hadn't Len and Rin would probably have died T_T

The fangirl inside me was giggling during the medicament part - why Miku was inside that room? I wanted a kiss! T_T *Yes, I have clearly forgotten that outside there are I-don't-know-how-many billion of zombies; the stupid fangirl side is yearning for a kiss xD*

Uhm... so being "Afflicted" doesn't mean losing all of your humanity - or Afflicted Kaito wouldn't have saved Miku. I'm glad she wants to restore all the humanity, maybe Len and Rin can help her with her plan? A suicidal plan? This would explane the "goodbye" in the teaser. I dunno WHO is saying goodbye to WHO, but I hope it's neither Rin or Len - they have already had too many sad endings T_T

You shouldn't put so intriguing teaser - which is the reason the twins are alive for? Looking forward for the next chapter!

P.s. English in this review is probably really crappy, but it isn't my mother language T_T sorry.
alkshdkjsagfaskjgfxjhdfjhfgdhs chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
Is this sorta based on A faint wish? That seires? Because I like it...alot. It's all good, good good. I can't wait for the next chapter; this totally needs more attention.
Vocaloid302 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Ooohh dis ish kinda like I am legend! Am I rite? Though separating Len and rin... I'm srry 2 u kagamine twins but umm not ur guyzez best idea...cough cough... O.o
AliyeH chapter 2 . 2/17/2012
Nice story!

I like the way you have described how Miri-am was born - this is the proof that sometimes homework can help you write a fanfiction.

And the love Rin and Len share even in a world like that... T_T

I didn't understand who was tha person writing the diary in the first chapter, though; it's neither Luka, Kaito, Gakupo or Miku - Gumi, maybe? And I loved the fact that the apocalypse took place in December 21 2012 xD

Aaaah - looking forward for the next chapter! The spoiler is teasing me! T_T

See you!
alkshdkjsagfaskjgfxjhdfjhfgdhs chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This is really good! Woah, there are real few actual engrossing, interesting fanfics nowadays. I hope you get more reviews!