Reviews for Consequences of Thoughtless Wishing
Tamha chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
I like this a lot. I could even see Jareth, knowing what was supposed to/nearly did happen, grabbing Raoul and making Christine think she had made the wish after all, and the events progressing as per written in comic's arc, fudging memories already fragile from the presence of paradoxical personages.
Zantetsuken Reverse chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
I like your solution, too. Running out of time is a perfectly logical way to lost. But, it's all good as long as Raoul isn't a golbin.
Mandamoonrose chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
Jareth X Sarah all the way!
butterflykrp2 chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
this was a great way to end it, good job my dear! please continue to write stories as it seems you have a gift for them.
A Pirate By Any Other Name chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
No no, I like that you stuck to the "only Sarah can beat the Labyrinth," because I firmly believe that too. And since I just finished a marathon of Doctor Who, I don't mind the rearranging of time at all. :D And the mirror thing was rather genius.

Loved the last line! perfect way to end it. :)

Btw, I'm am so jealous that you got to see Phantom of the Opera live! That's awesome! It's definitely on my bucket list.
butterflykrp2 chapter 4 . 11/27/2012
this is really good in fact this one might just be my favorite! keep it up!
RAGA chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
My goodness, this is hilarious XD Thank you so much for this -

I'm another fan of GND, but I did wonder why this whole wishing Raoul to the goblins business never involved a run-in with the Labyrinth. Of course, we could argue that Jareth has the power to do whatever he wants in his Labyrinth; nevertheless, I am tickled pink to see Christine having to become a runner to get back what she wished away :D

I do wonder if the Labyrinth will have another Champion or if there's some plot-twist on the way.
kiara-is-me chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
Lol this chapter was hillarious. I can't remember anything about Raoul killing any chickens, and I disagree with you on the stockholm syndrone thing. Erik was alone and depressed, and Christine always loved him, just more in a fathery way. Of course, if you twist it enough, you can turn it into boy/girl romance.
mcoyne1987 chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
hahaha love this :)
Pika chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
I like this one.
A Pirate By Any Other Name chapter 4 . 8/22/2012
Oh goodness, this is funny. I am having fun imagining this (oddly as a GND cartoon). And though I personally have never really liked Raoul (I think he's a bit of a ninny - especially when you read Leroux's original - I wanted to hang him myself! All that whining...) but I am okay with Christine marrying him. I suppose I can really explain it. It would be rather Stockholm of her to marry Erik, wouldn't it? But I do believe he loves Erik, in a way. Maybe not the marrying way, but in some way.

Very entertaining, can't wait to see what Sarah and Javert have gotten up to!
Mystra of Darkness chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Wow. This is just weird, but a very good story. "The giant baby has ecsaped!" Excelent.
Kuroneko388 chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
Yea Jareth, drop the Fop into The Bog.

I'm so eager to see what he's gonna do :)
A Pirate By Any Other Name chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
No, not the stench! LOL

Actually, I think Jareth should drop Raoul in the bog.

The story's great so far, I can't wait to read more!
p chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
nice story
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