|Reviews for La Vie Boheme, Part P|
| Cheese chapter 1 . 6/25
This looks like it was a really great story, but of was hard because I had no idea what was happening or who the characters were. I haven't read your other works (yet) and anybody else finding this alone most l would not want to read more. I suggest maybe putting a small paragraph before or during the story, explaining the characters and situation. How did Bree get into RENT? They visited Phantom Of the Opera? It was just really hard for me to follow, which sucks because of was funny and well written. Just help out new fans like me!
| bremela chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Whoah! You are SO awesome! I can't believe you would do this kind of thing for me again! And with the AVPM ref. and RENT, and IT'S SO AWESOME!