Reviews for As I'm Leaving
writingtrainingwheels chapter 1 . 1/27
Probably Never got around to reviewing this because I couldn't find the words. But it is one of the more moving things I've read on here. And The love is so parental and pure and across time and space and just screams maternal
Tinajp chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
I've been reading all ur stories but this one by far is the one that meesed me up...
TheUsagi1995 chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
There are no words i can say hat will be good enough. I am just going to say i am crying...Just crying...
Its just sad and yet great...
And i am just sitting here crying my eyes out...
Bella Lilac chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
Beautifully written. To me this is like Sam was in two places at once; asleep at his apartment in Palo Alto, as the fire went through the building, unaware, burnt, dying. But sort out his brother in his final moments; but was unaware his brother was in town, coming to visit - but maybe sensed he was near - needed his brothers comfort, reasurance, as he died in his brothers arms - whilst being at the same time at the apartment as he died in his sleep, in bed.

Well done in writing a story that really grabbed the reader, and was truly full of emotions - sadness, heartbreak, but along with comfort - also what I think had made in even more emotional, is that this is Dean writing this, him explaining on paper his experience, and trying to take it all in, whilst making sense of what happened. Truly amazing writing.

Bella Lilac Xx
Rafaela Amanda chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
Loved this AU pilot version, it was so beautiful and sad at the same time and I loved the Dean POV and see Sammy through his eyes, and when he saw the news was completely devastating, he and Jess die was very sad and even which makes sense, but Sam knew it was going to happen? he was there really?
ahayman12 chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Wow. I loved it! That was so sad yet beautiful at the same time. Thanks for breaking my heart.
saf72250323 chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
writeforeverforlife chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
This is... wow. Literally I was just tearing up. Please continue to be amazing.
twinklingeyes07 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Wow..that was soo overwhelming :) loved it !
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Noooooooooooooo... so sad!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
It was DEFINITELY awesome! I find the fanfictions with emotional trauma the best xD
jojospn chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Oh my God this is beautiful!
Meega-Nala-Kweesta chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Oh God...I'm crying...that was beautiful, and so, so, so very sad :'(
AuroraWeasley chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
GAAAAHHHH MY HEART HURTS NOW D': *sobbing while curled up in the corner*
mara-isamoose chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I feel like my chest has been ripped open and also like someone took a butter knife and tried to cut my heart in half. I love this so much.
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