|Reviews for Your son Sarah|
| Emily Hepworth chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
that was tension building I LOVED it!
I know this sounds crazy but I wrote my own fanfic at home about Kyle seeing John as a kid and meeting Kyle as his father. maybe you could add that onn but you dont have to (just a thought)
Try to make Kyle have the memories from when he first met sarah after john was concieved before he died
Thanks and I love your story
| isflamma chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Interesting. So far, so good. :) When will there be more?
| jerry533482 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
You have a nice plot going. On the critical side, maybe try to reduce your run-ons.
Keep it up.