Reviews for First Chances
Angry Fangirl chapter 10 . 12/18/2016
I love this story so much and so do many other people! I only have one question... WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IN 4 YEARS?!
peanutz03 chapter 10 . 6/14/2016
I wish they would update this!
Angry Reader chapter 10 . 6/7/2016
I swear to fucking god that if this person doesn't update this I am going to lose it!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/2/2016
I am really starting to get pissed that there hasn't been a chapter 11 for 4 years!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/31/2016
That was great!
Oh chapter 9 . 8/14/2015
Thought there would be Yakone in this story
LusaXTokloForeva chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I love Lusa and Toklo shipped together! Their relationship is so cute and sweet. Keep up the good work and I hope to see future updates soon!
Anon u chapter 7 . 8/14/2015
Great story! Please update soon!
gg no re chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
I don't even why people even bother trying to make Toklo and Lusa together. They can never be together as Erin Hunter confirmed they probably won't because they are different breeds! There is more of a chance of Toklo and Kallik being together because Grizzly bears and Polar bears sometimes are mates and they're cubs are called prizzly cubs.

I'm not trying to hate on your shipping but it's not logical because I think Toklo cares about Lusa as a little sister. It would make since that he is overprotective of Lusa because Tobi died and she is playful and small like Tobi.
Jbug chapter 10 . 6/17/2014
Guest chapter 10 . 5/17/2014
more of the two please
Dakota chapter 10 . 3/3/2013
This was very cool! i've always wanted Lusa and Toklo together
TanmanG chapter 10 . 2/27/2013
TanmanG chapter 10 . 2/27/2013
Ok You know i love this story best fan fiction ive read yet for seekers... Keep Up The Good Work!
TrollingForever chapter 10 . 10/17/2012
:O you updated! :D Really good chapter :)
25 | Page 1 2 Next »