Reviews for Reverie
Jelach chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
This is really good, keep up the good work xxx :)
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Read this for Canon Tour and missed posting review here. This is a nice look at how Bella handled the needed separations. The last part so fits her klutziness. Look forward to more from you as your time allows.
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Trust cannot be forced, or hurried. Thank you.
karenec chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
This was fabulous. I totally laughed out loud, on the train mind you, when Bella fell out of her chair. So brilliant! Thank you very much for sharing this story. I didn't see 'Reverie' on The Canon Tour page, but hope to soon :)
katmom chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
You wrote: Well, SHE certainly has a vivid imagination!

chele the original chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
well, talk about getting lost in the moment.

Well done!
Openhome chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
I've loved this story for a rather long time ;)

In all seriousness, you've done a wonderful job of portraying the teen Bella, still so unsure of herself and Edward's love for her. Her subtle joy as it plays against her natural fear is such a pleasure to read. Beautifully written!
laurafc1107 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Great story, I think you did an excellent job portraying canon

Bella at this time on the books.

This is what I wrote when I first reviewed this o/s as an entry for the Canon Tour. And now, I've just re-read it and have to say that I really, really love it! I like it so much when I read a canon Twi fic that is in fact completely canon (both in the plot and in the way characters speak). And this one is just like that, it feels like it could be a missing scene from the books.

You should really write for the other rounds of the Canon Tour, since in my opinion you did such a good job with this one. Congrats again!
idealskeptic chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
So cute! Bella is always so serious, even about romance, so it's nice to see her as a mere mortal who can get carried away in daydreams like that. Love Charlie's cameo too. :)
Igoogleeverything chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
great, well written and a little humour at the end, well done I enjoyed this :)
Rel8tivity chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
From the lost files! A good portrayal of Bella's struggle to re-adjust to Edward's return. But boy, we're talking fixated, yah?

Thanks for sharing!
Team Edward Rules All chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Great story!