|Reviews for Harry and the Pirates|
| Jonuts chapter 30 . 3/13
Just saying, if the end intention is that Harry and Ginny get together in some sort of true love, you may want to write her in a bit more than the occasional throw away snippet about how she is a pleasant armful. Do try and throw in some sort of reason that Harry should care about her if there's supposed to be anything beyond physical attraction and hormones. Be a shame though, since Hermione seems a much better fit here in this story by any measure other than the throw away comment about her smile in chapter 12 and being a pleasant armful here. The problem is, you really have Hermione cast as the leading lady, so if romantic entanglements become an issue in the story, it just becomes awkward if the leading guy ends up with someone else unless there's some sort of actual substance and reason to it. As it is, the couple of references to Ginny just come out weird and at best, and point to a hit it and quit it relationship. Really doesn't help that nothing she's shown so far would seem to really appeal to this Harry.
Just my two cents on the subject.
| Jonuts chapter 11 . 3/13
Ah, yes, the crushing moment when you realize even sprawling criminal empires pay taxes...Hahaha.
| Jonuts chapter 9 . 3/13
So...why did the slytherin chaser catch the snitch? Might want to fix that typo :)
| Jonuts chapter 7 . 3/13
I knew this chapter was going to be made of win and awesome as soon as the words "Balalaika's gifts" showed up. I am pleased to report that it most definitely did NOT disappoint.
| Jonuts chapter 3 . 3/13
Wow. We can only hope that Draco never discovers evangelical religion. He just talked Harry, Dudley, Hermione, AND Ron into Slytherin. That's scary on a whole separate level.
| Jarl of the North chapter 37 . 2/24
... Hell. Yes. I love this story SO much! Keep up the good work!
| SeanHicks4 chapter 37 . 2/23
Interesting chapter, cant wait to see Lockheart's final fall.
| Starfox5 chapter 37 . 2/23
Pansy in peril. Flirting ghosts. Teacher confrontations. Nice chapter.
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 37 . 2/23
Great update :)
| MWkillkenny84 chapter 37 . 2/23
... Tommy Tommy Tommy... no Doc Oliver, I was not talking of you, so please do not go Green Ranger on my sorry a*s... I was saying?
AH yes, Voldie, this time is not a Gryffin poor pureblood you've used, is a (relatively minor) important pureblood SLYTHERIN.
How much time it will pass before your 'supporter' WILL think of removing you?
| whitetigerwolf chapter 37 . 2/23
The only complaint I have is the wait between chapters, but then again, I'm not one to talk.
I love this story, and you are doing a fantastic job. Keep up the good work.
| diamondace4 chapter 5 . 2/17
um...why would dumbledore needa cloak? it aint december yet lol
| yue14121990 chapter 36 . 2/15
it's winter I think as a lot of people seem to use it
| mbahgila21 chapter 36 . 2/5
this is gold...
i like Dudley/Luna, Harry/Ginny, ship in this story... :)
update soon... :D
| Aerowind Kinomoto chapter 9 . 2/1
Just wanted to say that quidditch isn't as deficient as you're making it sound. In professional grade games, matches go on for hours, which is more than enough time to make the points from the snitch unuseful. School games are much shorter because the skill of the athletes is much less, so it doesn't quite scale down too well. However, there's a fix for that too, in the books. The Quidditch cup isn't determined by who has the most wins, but by who has the most total points at the end of the season. It's the reason Harry needed to wait until they were a few goals up before catching the snitch in book 3 to secure the win. If you're going to criticize quidditch, this is what you need to criticize. It then becomes a game to see who can run up the score the most.