|Reviews for When Will I Know|
| DreamerRoad chapter 15 . 6/2/2013
Nicely done. Very nicely done. :)
| DreamerRoad chapter 14 . 6/2/2013
"Do you by any chance speak starbucks?"... lol... I loved that line. And, of course, these two meeting back up... and him now understanding the confusion (I think?)... and her giving him a chance (I think?)...
Looking forward to the next few chapters.
| arlzs chapter 17 . 6/2/2013
That you recreated that shower was fantastic. I loved being in his head for that.
"My sweet girl is still telling me what's what." - 'my sweet girl' *sighs*
I really loved this. Obviously, I guess! It ended so perfectly and with such a sweet proposal. I loved the idea that he hadn't thought of it before, but then that it was what he wanted more than anything. Funny how it strikes you and then you have to have it. The romance of that! It's fantastic.
My only wonder at the end is how everything went down with Mike. How they 'came out'. I'm guessing it was a bit angsty and I love a good bit of angst...with some payoff (you'd of never guessed, right?). :)
Thanks for putting up with my blathering reviews. Hope I made you smile once or twice!
I should mention that whatsmynom and WriteOnTime rec'd this on twitter the other day. I left it open in the browser on my phone and am SO glad I had the spare time the other day to start reading something new.
| DreamerRoad chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
I like the Edward sunshine reference... it's very appropriate.
And, I really enjoyed the growth Bella experienced in this chapter...
| DreamerRoad chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
Wow... so she really did just leave it all behind? I'm impressed.
If I could just up and leave, I know I'd end up in California... doing what, I have no idea. But, that's what calls to me (from here on the U.S. East coast... :))
| DreamerRoad chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
Okay... so I'm happy she's finally doing for just herself. BUT, what the heck is up with Edward and Kate? Gah!
| DreamerRoad chapter 10 . 6/2/2013
Well, well, well... sneaky Edward. But, that was steamy... lord.
| DreamerRoad chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
I still want her to run, with him, but... can't blame the girl for doubting Edward.
Great job with this story...
| DreamerRoad chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
Run, Bella... Run...
Hmmm... offer from Edward? Lunch? Can't wait for that chapter. :)
| DreamerRoad chapter 7 . 6/2/2013
Another great chapter...
| arlzs chapter 16 . 6/2/2013
I love that that's the chapter song...I didn't remember that when I was rereading earlier!
Gah...he's so eager and sweet that morning. I love him. "...You are amazing." *hums contentedly*
Dying laughing: "Either that or I'm much, much better in bed than I thought."
I sort of had an epiphany when he was worried she'd leave, too. I didn't think about that being in his head, but it's so obvious when he says it. He's vulnerable, too. Love. Him.
"I lean into him. One of Edward's hobbies is making me swoon. He's really good at it." - totally, totally agree, Bella.
So glad there's this little epilogue that's left!
| DreamerRoad chapter 6 . 6/2/2013
I wouldn't be able to stop looking at wet, dripping, sunshine Edward. Can't really blame a girl. :)
| DreamerRoad chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
Good luck there, Edward...
Fun story... So glad I started reading it.
| DreamerRoad chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
Ahhh, he is holding back when it comes to Bella... nice.
| arlzs chapter 15 . 6/2/2013
The restaurant scene was one of my favorite in the story. I loved how she was so determined to be her and he was so flipping sexy. With his laughs and head tilts and brushing her hair away from her face. Come on, Edward. Give a girl a fighting chance! He's very, very good at getting what he wants. And, I suppose to her, that's a bit disconcerting, but to US...well, you know.
The hug in the elevator was one of the main things that made me smile. So innocent, yet filled with so much of everything. I just imagine him grinning into her hair, taking her in, and wishing so hard. :)
He called her 'baby'. A couple times. A well-placed 'baby' just kills me. I'm dead, so you know.
He said at one point, 'you had to go.' She really did. For both of them. If she hadn't, I totally feel like this -them - would have imploded. Everyone needed time - her, him, Mike...all of them. The idea of that is so lovely (that seems like a weird word, but it fits into the crazy that I am feeling/spouting off).