|Reviews for When Will I Know|
| roxiegirl chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Thanks Deb! Now we're getting somewhere...if you can just find Bella's backbone and heart, E and B are in business. But running away would hurt Mike too much. She has to take that first step to end it with Mike, THEN go to Edward. I look or ward to seeing how you resolve this delimma!
| Taunp chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Thank you for posting this chapter :)
I don't think I was breathing while reading this one. So much emotion.
Edward is asking a lot, but I think deep down Bella knows he's the right choice.
I hope she comes to this realization before the wedding to Mike happens.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| MistiS chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Loved this chapter a whole heck of a lot. If that were me I would totally believe he was trying to trick me too. Thanks for the update.
| jvr1708 chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
This is so good. I feel nervous, I can't wait to see what happens. Please hurry and update.
Love the way you write, can feel all the emotions in this story!
| lisazj chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Loved this: "He looks so out of place surrounded by the dingy, out-dated decor of the bank. Like the sun unexpectedly shining in a dark cave." Beautiful imagery.
And this: "His eyes are kaleidoscopes again. Sad, hopeful, excited. Around and around the inexplicable emotions flash." Gah, ever since Edward looked at her when she walked up to him in the bank, my heart has been in my throat too.
*Groans* Oh my God, she's doing it again. Doing what everybody else wants, what everybody else expects! Doesn't she realize how miserable that would be for her, eventually. Especially since Edward has told her how he feels.
And she's walking out. Becasue Edward can't POSSIBLY, REALLY want her. sksdnfksdhwhfjbasxlkhsdd, JFC. I can't take it.
| liz3615 chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Oh, Edward, even with all your plaided splendor, although tempting, it's just not enough. He tells her his new revelations now, just a month before her wedding! Men! Bella doesn't trust Mike or Edward and rightly so. It would be a huge mistake to go through with the wedding but not because she would want to be with Edward. I agree with her on different types of love but you have to have trust. I applaud her for leaving the restaurant, that was just too huge a mind-f*ck that he laid on her. How you described Edward as temptation was so spot on! And the song was so perfect. Thank you for the additional chapter. Can't wait for the next update! xo
| SweetNonsense chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
OMG PLEASE UPDATE! & please don let bella and mike get married :( X
| dragontattoo chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
This chapter was so wonderful and so sad at the same time. To have someone you have loved and lusted after for so long finally say what you want to hear only to wonder if it's true. How CAN you believe a player? Someone with a different girl on his arm every week?
The way you described the conversation was so realistic...I could have been sat at their table. If I was her BF I wouldn't know what advice to give her right now. I know I would definitely tell her NOT to marry Mike cos that is never gonna work. But Edward, even though he looks like he does? He has to prove himself. He has to fight for her. Will he?
Only you can tell me ;)
| kfoll chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
I still don't like this prick.
He wants Bella to give everything up for him, but won't offer her a thing in return.
What a dick!
She would be a complete fool if she did. Then again she already is for settling for Mike when she knows she doesn't love him the way she should.
Edward hasn't proved his love to Bella enough for her to take a chance on him but, she does need to think again about marrying Mike.
| ConstanC2Rob chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Gripping...that's the first word that comes to my mind. I absolutely love this chapter. You are a wonderful writer, Deb...best chapter in the story yet. I love the disjointed stammering as her mind tries to make sense of what is happening. It completely stirs the emotion. Excellent job!
(And this is saying something given the shower scene or shall we call it my new favorite fantasy!)
| JenDoesGym chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Wow that was great! How can she know he really loves her or if he's trying to get her from Mike? I can totally understand her not wanting to hurt everyone and Edward can't even promise her he wants to marry her and have kids. There are two kinds of love for sure. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for writing this chapter. The story wouldn't have been complete without it.
| shaz308 chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Ok so I'm guessing she doesn't marry Mike but then she disappears from all their lives. Looking forward to your next update, thanks.
| majose chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
He is crazy! Ans why will he trust him when he continuously hits on Mike's girls. Plus, his proposal is so selfish.
I cannot wait to read more
| mountainlion718 chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
like the poor girls nerves aren't on edge enough... i think she needs a vacation by herself (and then Edward shows up...lol)
| chinabearmeow chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
great chapter! love that she didn't roll over for him straight away and is thinking through the consequences.
Can't wait for more!