|Reviews for Unwanted Return|
| teamcharliealways chapter 17 . 5/3/2012
Luscious01 cooper_samantha there deffo gettin back together! I'll be so shocked if they don't! Cnt hav an amazing kiss! Like that not still hav feelings for each other! Cmon! Who charlie kidding! And she reciprocated tht kiSs! #stillVERYmuchinlove I say! Please update again real soon! I love this fic! I love zoe! She the star of this fic! Truly a braxton and daddy bwax's lil princess! She is so adorable! I love it wen chax hug and zoe goes to push charlie away! Too funny! 3333 awwwh I love me some #zoelove! Update AGAIN! Real soon, real real soon! Xxxxxxxxxxxx
| lazza77 chapter 17 . 5/3/2012
Great update. Got excited at the end, thinking all was good, & then Charlie backed away. I suppose she needs more time.
Thank you for the regular updates. I am loving this story & cannot wait for more.
| abi3090 chapter 16 . 5/3/2012
Please update i cant wait any longer to find out what happens next
| Jenny chapter 16 . 5/2/2012
I love it can't wait 4 more
| Izzy09 chapter 16 . 5/1/2012
I was not surprised when Matt proposed nor when Charlie turned him down. Neityher was I surprised when Brax hooked up with Ali. He should have fought for Charlie which I think he will when he realises he made a mistake with Ali. You write Zoey so well. I look forward to your next chapter. I have enjoyed every minute of your story.
| SF90 chapter 16 . 5/1/2012
WOW loved this chapter but Brax you Idiot what were you thinking (oh yeah thats right you wernt). So glad Charlie said no to matts proposal my heart was in my mouth when reading it. Just want brax and charlie togehter now i think they need to have a good talk and be honest about their feelings for one another before they can move forward. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU UPDATE REALLY SOON (LIKE TODAY LOL) :)
| RoRo90 chapter 16 . 4/30/2012
My heart was in my mouth when Matt proposed I had to take a breather and then come back to it... you have no idea how loudly I sighed when she said no.
BRAX YOU IDIOT why why why does he always have to go do something stupid (keep it in you pants) I really hope Charlie listens to Matt and she fights for Brax, So glad that matt admitted that he could see how much Brax loves Charlie too
please please update as soon as you can :)
| beebee483 chapter 16 . 4/30/2012
OMG OMG OMG ... I seriously cannot breathe all the way through that I found myself holding my breath!
You are seriously genius !
I tell ya ... If I didn't love love Brax so God damn much , I'd so be rooting for Matt! That guy is seriously a sweetheart .. after everything he is still able to rise above it all ... I really felt for him but was kinda cheering a little at the same time lol ... Was cracking up when he said Charlie Braxton heehee
Now I'm not gunna get started on Brax sleepingwith that other chick ... I'm sure we all think he's gotta have rocks in his head lol
So not sure if I mentioned how much I loved this chapter lol ... But I'm now getting scared that you may be ending this soon :-( ... I'm obsessed with this fic and decided to read it again from the start and noticed that you had said this was going to be a short fic around 20 chapters?
Anyways all that said, I love it &NEED the next update :-) please update soon xx
| Sasarassa chapter 16 . 4/30/2012
Great update, lovely long chapter, lots going on and exciting to read.
From the beginning of this story I have tried really hard to dislike Matt, yet can't. (In fact I felt for him when Charlie said no to his proposal, and loved the conversation he had with her later). When I came to the end of this chapter I realized it's because you write about him in such a well rounded way, he's as important to the story, as the other main characters- rather than some shadowy figure getting in the way of Charlie & Brax's happiness.
| Shona.x chapter 16 . 4/30/2012
WOW! Brilliant chapter, BRAX you idiot! Why? Why did he have to go and do that the night of all nights to sleep with someone else? :( Aww I feel sorry for Matt, but this may mean Chax reunite :D I hope they do stay friends. Now Charlie just needs to get her act together and go after Brax hopefully he won't be with Ali still :( Please please update soon, can't wait to see what happens next. Fingers crossed for a Chax reunion in the next chapter. :D x
| CharlieAndBraxLover chapter 16 . 4/29/2012
Thank you for not splitting this in two! I love the really long chapters :)
Anyway, so much emotion in that, amazing! Chax have so much love for each its so good ;) glad matt has been so supportive and hasnt held a grudge.
Hope chax sort it out soon. Loving your writing more and more every word :D please update again asap :)
| totallymeagain chapter 16 . 4/29/2012
Oh dear lord! She doesn't want him, so can I have Matt? What an amazing man!
Okay, lots of games have been played here. Mind games. I am glad Charlie said no, it was pretty gutsy to turn him down in a room packed with other people. I enjoyed Charlie and Brax' talk on the beach, but they really need to step up and tell each other how they feel. Okay, Ali probably didn't help but he regrets it and she told him it was over, so you can't really blame the guy, he has been waiting for her for quite some time. I have she goes to talk to him and they can sort things out. Matt's little slip up at the end! Waw, Charlie Braxton aye... That is probably not on the cards yet, but when (not if) they do get together I hope it is for good and a wedding does fit into that scenary.
That was such an amazing chapter! I really tried not to read ahead and I didn't but I practically read every scentence twice because I was scared that I was going to miss one! What an amazing story. Please, please, please update soon. Thank you so very very much.
| Lyddie01 chapter 16 . 4/29/2012
The ending was fantastic, I'm really glad Matt wants Charlie to get back with Brax and was really lovely about it and still wants to be friends and the baby sitter True Matt style- what a nice guy :-)
Stupid Brax, taking Ali home.. At least he knows it was a mistake.. Hopefully Charlie realizes, she shrugged Brax off, he was in his rights too though..
I get the feeling the next chapter is going to be AMAZING, and what we've all been waiting for :-) Update really, really soon please Sam! Xx :-)
| Talina charlie girl chapter 16 . 4/29/2012
I was looking forward to the update for this story so much. I love it and all the characters are fabulous yes even Matt but the star oif the show is Zoe of course. I cant wait for Chax to reunite
| ema murphy chapter 16 . 4/29/2012
now ur just teasing update asap lov this story x