Reviews for A Helping Hand
Irrelevant86 chapter 4 . 8/5/2013
Please update!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
I honestly hate Madeline westen
please chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
Please update
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Keep writing. I'm really enjoying the story.
msgemgem chapter 4 . 6/9/2012
Great chapter - Joshua was as amazing as I thought he would be .

Cant wait for the whole Jacob thing to be over.

Love how Sarah and Michael’s relationship is progressing.

Cant wait to see how Michael and josh get along.

please please update soon xxx
WritePassion chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This story has a lot of potential. The only thing that bothers me is the way the dialogue is written. It's confusing to write Michael or Maddie's dialogue in the same paragraph as Sarah's. Sometimes I can't tell who's talking. Otherwise, nice start!
bcmom chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
Great job so far. I like it. thanks More please.
FMSMandi chapter 4 . 5/19/2012
I thought it was a great chapter. Can't wait for more.
SoLongNotGoodnight chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Love it! :)
neverephemeral chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Awh, I liked it. Her son is adorable and I loved that little scene. Plus I really liked the Michael and her scene at the end. (: xx
The Girl Who Cried Werewolf chapter 3 . 5/10/2012
I really like this story! It's so hard to find a good Burn Notice fic anywhere. I hope you update this soon!
msgemgem chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
Great job on introducing sam and fi - im not a huge fan of fi myself - she’s far to aloof and impersonal for my liking (I never got hy someone as caring as Michael would be ith someone like fione) so im hoping she won’t play a huge part In the fic but you nailed her from the start so great writing - love sam as well he is such a great character. Really funny.

Really starting to see what kind of person sarah is also now that she seems to be coming out of her shell, specifically around Michael. The pity party she taking is somewhat grating I mean I get that she is hurt, confused and broken and all of that but one of the things I liked mose about her were the fact that she had the guts to leave her husband so that whole I hate myself im repulsed by myself thing kind of came out of left field for me. Not a huge deal - I just don’t want to be one of those reviewers that nly say it was great cant wait for more - not really helpful to the author and I thought maybe you would appreciate a different perspective on the story - please feel free to tell me if you ever want me to just shut up lol.

Such a silly thing for her to go home to her husband - is he just not supposed to notice that she hasn’t been home in a few days? - or is he not going to realise that something is going on and that she is planning to leave him ? - so many questions….

Can not wait to meet josh Im guessing he’s going to be just the cutest little boy - and I can not wait to see how josh and Michael get along, ive always imagined Michael would be an excellent father so im looking forward to them bonding.
Jedi Skysinger chapter 3 . 3/30/2012
Fiona let Sam drive her car? Whoa! Sarah is taking an awful big risk. I'm sure Team Westen will be getting involved before the week is out.
storyfan101 chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
I find your story quite interesting. I look forward to seeing how things work out for Sarah.

But Fi should't hold Sam responsible for any of his lost cars. Every single one of them was destroyed by Michael. (Other than Jesse's Porsche and that one was Fi's doing.) But if this is foreshadowing for something exciting with Sam in a car chase, I'm all for it!
neverephemeral chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
Keep on doing what you're doing. (: You wrote Sam and Fi perfectly. haha.
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