Reviews for That Baseball Idiot
RubyFiamma chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Wow, that was hot...
I don't usually like first person povs but it was still sexy!
Nico Zi chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
oh my god so hotttt! wow is it really your first?! you just did very GREAT :D
I loved it, thank you x3
Marcela chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Oh, wow. The conversation is just written so well:) really enjoyed, shame it is just one-shot
Vert.Framboise.Rouge.Citron chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Oooh my.. Woah .. Uh.. This... Was.. Oh shit, It was like.. It was so good I forgot my words o.o
*cough cough* I mean, girl you are great, like really REALLY FUCKING AMAZING *O* (Don't pay too much attention to those vulgar notes pleaaase, I just don't know what to say.. Except it was a real pleasure to read you, but I assume you might have already understood that xD) No, seriously, it was freaking awesome :D I think you're really talented at writing (at least at writing 8059 fanfics!), all their movements(oh god and what movements! xD) and actions seemed so natural :O Yeah, I'm really glad I found your writings, you made my day ma'am . Maybe that's enough with the congratulations and I should stop now, for if I keep on going this way, I'll soon call you a goddess (hey, no kidding!)..
Ok, I'm leaving now, thank you again for everything Becca-girl :D
Kisses, Framboise.
PS : If I made grammatical or spelling faults, I'm really sorry . As a french girl, my english sure could be better..
YaoiAddict8059 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Oh my god I'm going crazy... Yamamoto you beast OEBDILSNSUSLABS I LOVE YOUUU! .
GamerChuu chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Oh my... Ohmyohmyohmy... I simply love this! Is ooo much better than simple BD, u gave me courage to do one myself!

Eh. Want a real fanfic chalenge? Try write a Raito x L , from Death note. Its really difficult. I've alredy tried, they're, huh, a... Difficult pair. (witch makes it all more interesting)

But the fanfic is soooooo awesome! Congrats, really good!
azure sea chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
oh my... *nosebleed*

very hot!

i liked that very much!
koi.no.michi chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
that was hot. for a first smut that was seriosuly amazing yamagoku are love.
Ale-chan chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Wow...

This is the best 8059 I've read in quite a while...

You did a great job! Keep it up! *o*
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This is so freaking awesome! I can't believe how well your smut came out for your first time.. I can't even write smut... TTTT

Love it~ :D
estupido chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
That was so.. hawt! x'D

Like seriouslyyyyyyy.

Nicely doneee X33
ColdInnocence chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
OMG! That was beautiful, and I loved it!
You know who chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Very well written, you got the characters spot on couldnt think of anything to improve in that area. Speachless tbh you nailed it ;) x
HyperMusic12 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
ahhh! I loved it! So sweet and sexy.
iluvtakeshi96 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Are you sure this is your first smut fic? xD
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