|Reviews for My Sweet Persephone|
| Zerousy chapter 16 . 7/3
Well I'm surprised its updated but I'm not going to bitch about the lack of updating because I'd be one to talk. But yay for the update
| c c chapter 15 . 6/26
| Ana-Shadow-Wolf chapter 15 . 1/5
Okay, this HAS to be one of the GREATEST fics I've ever read, not only of Hellraiser, but of all fics. I admit, when the angels appeared, I got nervous because I've read a lot of fics that just bash, distort and twist Heaven and God. I'm happy to see that you did a perfect work here, not making them out as villains and speaking of balance among light and dark. PERFECT! I just hope, truly hope, that Kirsty and Pinhead will be reunited. Another thing, congrats on their relationship. I read a lot of fics that just turn Kirsty into a mindless slave or worse. Here, though attracted to Pinhead, she is still a good person and has her inner strength, also being conflicted about her feelings, so I can REALLY see she acting like that.
I hope to see more chapters soon! This is great!
| The newbie phan chapter 15 . 11/12/2014
OOOOOOH MYYYYY GOOOOOSH I LOVED IT! Your portrayal, the plot, the characterization, comic relief, even the diction put into this story is amazing and just the fact that I found a story more than three chapters ling comes as a gargantuan relief to your's truly. I adore this fanfic! PLEEEEAAAASE continue soon!
-your obiedient servant,
| Ryuno chu chapter 8 . 10/11/2014
I love the image of Pinhead sleeping. I hope we get more of that.
| Ryuno chu chapter 7 . 10/11/2014
Damn. This is so twisted, but I like how you keep it in character. I would however not be opposed to a rare bit of tenderness.
| V chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
I love this story;D
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/21/2014
Good story. I hope you continue.
| Courtroom Artist chapter 15 . 8/14/2014
Read this one end-to-end in an afternoon. I like it! Have subscribed to your newsletter. ;)
Something you might note is that the more sensory detail you give, the more you can draw the reader in. Grab a copy of Dante's _Inferno_ (I like the Ciardi translation for English; can't speak for other languages) and take a close look at the way the environment is described, when the author chooses to bother with it. For all the formality and archaism, it gives a vivid picture.
| guest chapter 15 . 7/8/2014
Please update I love this story so much!
| LJ1983 chapter 15 . 7/4/2014
Aww, what a sweet little update. Short, but definitely sweet. :) Interesting to see how their connection hasn't broken, despite the distance. Hopefully they shall be reunited. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| Zerousy chapter 15 . 6/29/2014
I enjoyed this chapter
| Kendra Iscariette chapter 14 . 6/29/2014
Fabulous story, thank you.
| PLLML chapter 14 . 5/31/2014
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I can't control my fangirling! sorry about that lol this was wonder I love this so much! 3
| Nerd91 chapter 13 . 5/25/2014
it's about time...
all good things to those who wait and this was extremely good. Poor leviathan laid low by a single pin from Pinhead's own head. Oh well time for a new King I suppose. I wonder if he'll re-decorate like more pins here and there maybe have Angelique paint some of the darker halls a blinding bright pink just to mess with the souls of the damned. Chatterer could start having 'Friday Night Bingo Pain Tournaments."
very well worth the wait.
bloodiest of regards,