Reviews for Insider Trading: Outtakes from Hot Commodity
mandy52799 chapter 5 . 1/8
So there is one outtake I was hoping to see. I feel like Edward really needed to get closure with Jessica. If you ever think about writing another outtake, I think it would be a good one. :)
Lafemmevegeta chapter 4 . 12/17/2017
Great behind the scenes coverage. Best Charlie integration ever!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
So how exactly does Jasper think Bella won't get hurt? Edward is planning to make her fall in love with him for the bet. But HE has no intentions of loving her, so presumably he plans to leave her after he wins. So wouldn't it all blow up then? Bella would still be hurt and Jasper would still lose Alice. Men can be so dumb. Ugh. Kinda funny that Emmett is the smart level headed one here.
ficfangirl chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
Thanks for the outtakes!
debslmac chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
:) :)
Lafemmevegeta chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
Nice outtakes! Good to see those moments we missed. Loved it.
keyecullen chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
This was my favorite outtake. How can you not love Charlie? Loved his reminiscing about Bella's past relationships. Gosh, no wonder he wanted to grill Edward. Bella hasn't had a lot of good luck with boys, has she?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/12/2013
Still seems to me that he gave Michael the opportunity to leave/say no.
shaz308 chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
Looks like his wish that they don't find out about the bet isn't going to come true. Great story.
slc6548 chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
dazzleglo chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Damn I love Charlie.
Chloe Masen chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
I loved this! CPOV ftw! I wonder if we'll get another after Betgate...

Loved reading about Bella's past boyfriends from her dad's point of view.

Edward fishing was as hilarious as I expected. Have you ever thought about Rob fishing? I wonder if he can? Or has the patience for it? He's so fidgety, I can't imagine him sitting - or standing - still that long. I suppose I could just make it easy on him and jump on his dick. I mean hook. Believe me?

Wonder what Charlie would think of HIM?...

Great outtake, babe! NOW GET YOUR ASS BUSY WITH IYOK. Pwease? xo
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
Oh that is a classic CxE conversation!
tinabambina chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
I wish he'd just tell her about the bloody bet! It's going to bite him on the arse eventually, no? It will be much better coming from him! Xxxx
tff000 chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
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