|Reviews for Crushes, Bullying, Relationships and Revenge|
| KuroNicoNeko chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Wao... such wonderful story. /w/ I love it... Reminds me of 1827
| duchessme chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
| Lissy Stage chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I can actually see this happening in Japan, which is quite scary.
You have a few grammatical problems, mostly to do with not adding some sort of punctuation before the end quotation marks. Other than that, wonderful job!
| theSardonyx chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I think I saw a story similar to this once. They're alike in a lot of points and I wished the author would make more of these. Then here you are. You made up my day!
The idea of revenge is really cool, especially here. Sometimes, I wish there are people like Satoshi. And that there are no people like Riku and Risa. (I'm referring to the characters in this story.) But hey, life's like that. People are naturally jealous creatures.
Write on..! Yuna
| damons-hot-as-hell chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
weell that was pretty radom bt cool
| Fanboygirl chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
aww how cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
bwhahahahahaha he tripped her XD
| Xardain-Ominvus chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
That was a good story. My opinion is that it would have made a good chapter story. Not saying there's anything wrong with it, just an opinion. :)
| Satoshi Mousey chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
nice, awesome writing too. i have to admit i feel sorry for the redhead, but i also say good riddence to the harada.