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Elle chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Also you may want to get a beta to go over your bio. Coming from England myself I'm a little offended that you've referred to London as a country - its our capital, not a country of its own right.
Elle chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
I think you need a bit more practice with your writing. You need to develop the story and the characters. It felt very rushed and you definitely need a beta for spelling and grammar errors.