|Reviews for Portalborn|
| Hammerchuckery chapter 10 . 5/6/2012
Great chapter. Wheatley and magic sounds like a bad idea. Hope it happens.
Which also means that Glados too can potentially wield magic. Can't wait to find out.
| Lurker chapter 10 . 5/6/2012
I've been following your story and I have to say it's a good read. Especially this chapter I was anxiously hoping and waiting for this to happen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter hopefully GLaDOS will make an appearance.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 9 . 4/30/2012
Can't believe I'm still making their/they're mistakes. Probably something to do with desire to catch up to the last chapter and reading a few hours before dawn. Feels good to catch up, then see an update.
More things to praise:
There's a sense of time progression that I rarely see in any fanfic.
Thank you for not having the cliche 'caught reading a diary' act for Doug.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 8 . 4/30/2012
Never expected this story to have such strong and emotional characters. They're portrayals are quite fitting. Hope to see more Science, er modern improvements and such.
| Devastator chapter 7 . 4/5/2012
Good I still hope you at least mention Black Mesa or Gordan as a little reference.
| Adventure Sphere chapter 7 . 4/5/2012
Was that Chell i wonder? :) anyway this story is perfect
| Devastator chapter 6 . 3/29/2012
I actually came up with a better way you could mention Gordan not much of a writer so please dont use my exact words (as they aren't very good) in case you do decide to write something similar. I was thinking wheatley could say something like this.
"You know mate ive been thinking about where we obviously arnt on Earth because of well those 2 bloody moons in the all those alien creatures runnig come to the conclusion were on some other even another universe! Another universe might mean different laws of would explain this magic nonsense. I knew I should have read that paper on higher dimensional physics by that scientist fellow over at Black was his name again?Morgan?No Gordan Freeman! Thats right Gordan Freeman."
Tried my best to do wheatleys English accent.I hope you have something like this in the pm you this but I dont have an really need one since I dont write stories.
| Devastator chapter 6 . 3/28/2012
Ok this is really whole im the dragonborn bitch thing was a little over the top and out of place but thats my only complaint with the story.I got some suggestions for future chapters if you continue. Portal and Half life share the same universe. The Combine and Daedra are both inter dimensional aliens however the Daedra are more demonic then alien to the inhabitants of Nirn but we on Earth would call them alien.
Perhaps you could have some Combine stumble through a portal into the Elder Scrolls universe or something like that. Or instead just make it simple and have Doug mention Gordan might have looked up to him as a fellow scientist even though they are from rival companies.
Speaking of different universes mabey you could have a bit of a minor crossover with Bethesdas other game Fallout?Some sort of experiment sends someone from Fallout to the Elder Scrolls verse?
Oh and I have the Space Core mod what this story is based on right?
This is a really great fic and I hope you continue soon!
| Anakin Mario Son43 chapter 6 . 3/25/2012
Oh crap, why do I get the feeling GLaDOS is going to come in here soon? I hope I'm not going crazy, cause I had the thought that the Dragonborn would make for a good test subject. Also, a DB with a portal gun. Imagine that. Update soon! Hasta!
| Eternal Density chapter 5 . 3/23/2012
Yay I was hoping someone would write this crossover. You've made a pretty good story out of it! The grammar is occasionally a little scattered though.
| Adventure Sphere chapter 5 . 3/12/2012
Any possibility of Rick? He got sucked into space too.
| Anakin Mario Son43 chapter 4 . 3/3/2012
So, Wheatly did come down with Space. I was guesing it was him the moment I read his first line. I heard his voice in my head for some reason. Update soon! Hasta!
| BNG1911 chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
I suggest that Wheatly should have a guest appearance since he is spotted in the skill manual of the mod. Nice work!
| Invader jrek chapter 3 . 2/25/2012
"I AM THE DRAGONBORN BITCH! FUS RO DAH!"
*Mind explodes from EPICNESS!*
| ASHPoD67 chapter 2 . 2/20/2012
Space core, old man dying, farenger blowing up, and you can eat the chapter like cake? How more epic can this story get?